Janellebelovedpig

@hybridlore     @koshka     @keilah-h       @elishavet-pidyon       @theducktator     @grcr   @whalekeeper   @power

NEW CHAPTERS!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*sits back and smiles*

@rae

awesome!

Tag me when you do!

@rae

I know!! That quote is just AMAZING!!! I would love to see more of him!

Yes, it was a little bit flat in places, and maybe it could use some reworking, but honestly I think 1st person would spoil it. I liked all the scenes you had and the way you laid it out, even if it could use a teeny bit of work. That’s what I’m trying to say.…[Read more]

@rae

Sorry! I just saw this.

Hmmm…. I don’t like first person naritives… so that already makes me biased, but I honestly really liked that chapter the way it is. Like, a LOT. I don’t want you to touch it. If it’s the chapter I’m thinking of (the end one) it was one of my very favorites.

You can try the first person, but I say leave…[Read more]

@rae

since most publishing companies fail within five years

Ouch.

Hahahahaha! Totally joking.

Well that’s really great. I’ve gone through the nightmare, and while horrible, at least it helped me know which information I wanted/needed readily available to be able to have WHP set up in a way that other authors would get what they…[Read more]

@keilah-h

So true though! XD

@hybridlore

Ha. Ha.

Very funny.

@hybridlore

Hmmm. *grins* I guess we shall just have to see. But it can be nothing good.

I mean, I love these characters.

@hybridlore

aha. Thanks

@hybridlore

What are you doing to them?!

Haha!!! Badness. 😈

Any predictions?!?!

Glad it’s interesting.

@hybridlore

Can you please put them on Word?

@rae

You are so welcome!!! I’m so glad it’s encouraging!!!

Wait really!!!!!??? You might be going with us?!?!?!

We do some marketing on our website, but we are more limited as we don’t do any social media platforms. But we would still do all we can to market your book.

@rae

Go Rae! Go Rae! Go Rae!!!!

@hybridlore     @koshka     @keilah-h       @elishavet-pidyon       @theducktator     @grcr   @whalekeeper   @power

NEW CHAPTERS!!!

*evil grin*

@theducktator

NOOOOO! My grammar Nazi!! *sobs*

lolololololol. Sounds good. I’ll be gone an entire week in July, coming up pretty soon, so that should give you all the time you need. (Though I hope to have this book finished by then)

@hybridlore

Okay, nice!

Yes, lolol. He did apologize. For real this time.

How about Michael? Thoughts on what he said?

@hybridlore

Yes, but not anyone that we know. yet

Jonathan’s arc is starting to turn around, yay! 😁 I liked the way you did that,

So what are you meaning by this? (not that your’re wrong, just interested to see how these sections are coming across to the reader.)

@keilah-h

well, one thing, it made me decide I NEVER would want to ever play minecraft. That game would bore me out of my mind. XD

@highscribeofaetherium

Well, first off, I was really annoyed by the time I got to it. Just the whole minecraft stuff was driving me out of my mind. I felt like with that one he was relying more on the novelty of having his stick figures in a video game then his actual story.

I liked Purple and The King’s story, and I knew at once that the boy…[Read more]