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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ changed their profile picture 2 years, 11 months ago
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Esther replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
@trailblazer @mineralizedwritings @acancello @esther-c @grcr @freedomwriter76
Just for fun, I’m posting Ottoline’s mood board/aesthetic. Because why not, lol.
Do you guys have mood boards for any characters in this party? If so, feel free to post them. (Pics are FINALLY working again!!!)
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Anyone else love Moodboards/Aesthetics? in the forum Art 2 years, 11 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @acancello @highscribeofaetherium @loopylin @keilah-h
Here’s another one, my new favorite that I did a couple weeks ago. Pics are finally working again!!!
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Anyone else love moodboards/aesthetics? I tried explaining it to my class…and they think I’m weird. Not that they didn’t think that before, lol.
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Yeah, I love them! I actually discovered they were a thing through KP 😅
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Same! I didn’t know they existed until KP either.
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I didn’t know they were a thing until I joined KP either. I haven’t made any, but I might try it at some point. Where do you get the images that you use in them?
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@jonas I think they’re really fun, and help me build the characters and capture their personality. I look up the images either on google or on canva photos. I design all my boards on a website called Canva. It’s free unless you get the premium version.
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Okay. Thanks! I’ll have to try that.
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No problem! I am completely obsessed with them now, and they’re just super fun especially when you’ve hit a mental roadblock in your writing (TOTALLY not speaking from experience….i mean, not at all….jk)
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Yeah. It sounds like another thing to distract me from actually writing XD. You can never have too many of those!
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Haha yeah….I have KP, music, school. volleyball, friends, and now moodboards to distract me, lol
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Yep, I’m on YDubs! Thanks for the tag @hybridlore 😁
Uh, let’s see. A little bit about me. I play guitar and sing for church, I’m about to be a PK, I just sort of finished a decent sized novel (no editing, so it’s kinda rough XD), and I’m working on a sequel. Hybridlore is kind of the beta reader for all that stuff (:
Aaaaanyway,…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Aww, I love it!! 🥹
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Kathleen replied to the topic I can’t load a new profile picture… in the forum Questions and Support 2 years, 11 months ago
Awesome! I tested out the profiles and they seem to be working on my end as well.
How is the formatting? Is it still wonky on your end?
@grcr @jonas @trailblazer @highscribeofaetherium @everyonewhohasbeenhavingtroublewiththeirprofilepictures
So, I made some changes to the site, and the profiles seem to be working again! Let me…[Read more]
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Kathleen changed their profile picture 2 years, 11 months ago
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Kathleen replied to the topic I can’t load a new profile picture… in the forum Questions and Support 2 years, 11 months ago
Yes! I’m indeed alive!
Sorry for leaving all of you guys hanging, I’ve been out of the country for the past month and haven’t had access to a computer until now.
Glad to be back, but not so glad that the KP site appears to be having some issues lol. Well, hopefully, soon that won’t be the case!
Again, thank you Axiom, and…[Read more]
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Kathleen replied to the topic I can’t load a new profile picture… in the forum Questions and Support 2 years, 11 months ago
Huh, there definitely seems to be a problem with the programming in the back end of the site that’s causing all these profile image issues.
I’ll see what I can do and hopefully, profile pictures will be back working smoothly again soon! Thanks for letting me know about this!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
@thearcanceaxiom
That’s very true! It’s a skill that takes a lot of time to develop, taking in a lot of different ideas from pros, plot, character, and bringing those different ideas into something cohesive is a challenge, but it’s worth it in the end!
I have a cousin that’s older than me, and he once read my work and said “I bet I could write…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
On them having previous dealings, that can actually work, but the readers haven’t seen those previous dealings, so you need to show that somewhere. We’ve seen the Pythonos on many other occasions, but not in any that make it so that they are that much of an immediate threat when your on the run like that. I still think the odor is…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
Well, Sef wasn’t at her house when Neveah and Hanna were kidnapped. They were leaving the slums, and were walking down the path. It was a whole “group” thing, if that makes sense.
Sef saw them being taken when she was on her way back from the well.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
Cassian is Lilitu’s older brother. (I’m pretty sure it’s in there somewhere? idk, now I’m second guessing myself, haha)
I don’t know, I probably should know, but I don’t know where Cassian is, lol. I guess he just wasn’t in the scene? He’s old enough to work, so probably doing that or stealing something to feed his family. Characters are…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Hi guys! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 11 months ago
Hi Divinity, I’m Sara 🙂 I’m a freshman in high school. You’re going to love KP!
I am working on my WIP, and am trying to fix some problems with it, but I am making some progress (I think???).
I have 2 horses,
too many chickens(you can NEVER have too many chickens!!!!), 1 dog, 4 cats, and a herd of cows. We farm and ranch in…[Read more] -
SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
One thing to consider might be to actually not show what happens to Neveah until later in the story, instead of following her. That way you could linearly follow Sef and Lillitu up through this chapter. Cutting to Neveah and Ottoline after Sef and Lillitu jump off the cliff could be a great way to add tension. Always cut when your audience…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
Here’s Sef’s reaction:
Chapter 4: Stolen
***revisal, the new segment at the end****
“Hush,” Cassian squeezed her tighter. Sef sobbed into his shoulder.
“I hate you!” she yelled in his ear. At that moment, she really believed it.
“Yes, I know,” he smiled sadly, knowingly. Sef soon got tired of crying and struggling and so she…[Read more]
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