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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Lol! Maybe you should try going to events in your town with your family? Or like I said above, events with friends? Oh! Having a party for no reason at all is also fun!
I’m not trying to push you to do anything you dont want though😊 I just hope you get to meet some real good friends💗 💕 🤗
The problem is…I don’t have very many good f…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
This is okay a little bit and in some places (for instance I think it was well-used in the scene where Lilitu was telling Sef his dream) but eventually, and in some places, it just gets annoying and interrupts a read.
Okay, got it! I agree I definitely overused those in this segment.
Also about the critique on…
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Kathleen replied to the topic Apologetics in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 11 months ago
Sorry for suddenly going mia for a bit, one of my co-workers got sick so I had a few extra shifts this week and haven’t been able to get online until now!
Anyway, good to be back again, yet again!
It’s been going really well! I’ve been working, doing some writing (obviously,) and preparing for a two-year mission that will hop…
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Allison replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Yep! It was really fun, I have never been to one either and decided to give it a shot and was so glad I did! We learned about 6 different, simple dances and I tried to do the “Cotton-eye Joe” But couldn’t, 😀
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Allison replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Hi!
And don’t worry about not being on, you’re good! It’s good to see that you have a life outside of KP…(unlike me…)
I totally understand, when we first moved I was on KP a ton more than I am now 🙂 Sometimes it helps just to put yourself out there, go to an event with other teens (bring a friend or two if your nervous)…[Read more]
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Euodia replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years, 11 months ago
I think the main thing is just noticing where the light hits. It’s kinda leathery, so the tiny folds that collect near the edging of each piece have these kind of triangle highlights. Also, the folds move in a diagonal direction. I actually found a really good video on clothing folds awhile ago, and one of the examples was d…
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Euodia replied to the topic ✨ WIP Rant Chat!!! ✨ in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
OoOoOo!!! I am very intrigued!
So are the two characters you introduced inspired by… middle-eastern culture?
And I would love to hear more! I’m fine with spoilers. XD
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Euodia replied to the topic writing historical fictions in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
*quietly watches from the sidelines*
I love WWII and I’m loving this so far.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
@rae @mineralizedwritings @esther-c
Here’s a new scene I’m working on. Thoughts? Concerns?
She ran across the prairie. She didn’t know where she was going, and she didn’t care. Running helped her to forget…to forget last night, and all the other nights like it.
“Scream all you want…ain’t nobody gonna here you…” she could still feel the welts…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Yep!
Heyyy!
Hi!! I’m so sorry I haven’t been on in forever (Maybe its only been like 3 days, but still a long time 🙂 ) So… I have been crazy, crazy busy. Like, I even went to my first barn dance in my new town and there were almost 100 high schoolers🤯 Personally I love to hang out with people so I went without knowing anyon…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
all this is hurting my brain!!! 😂 🤣 It’s been a long day…
So why did the Pythonos name it the UNIT? (In this case you might want to make it ‘Unit’ in lowercase, because capitalization usually denotes an acronym.)
Otherwise, you could make it an acronym. I could help brainstorm ideas for that if you like.
Any help would be great. I’m a h…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
Sorry😅 I know how frustrating it can be when you see your brain child measured and prodded as if it were in the UNIT🤣 Your taking it really well though, and even with excitement, so that’s a really good mentality. Your showing wonderful meekness in that way, being open to learning and changing for the better. I would say that y…
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Allison replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Hi!! I’m so sorry I haven’t been on in forever (Maybe its only been like 3 days, but still a long time 🙂 ) So… I have been crazy, crazy busy. Like, I even went to my first barn dance in my new town and there were almost 100 high schoolers🤯 Personally I love to hang out with people so I went without knowing anyone :D…[Read more]
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Euodia replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
*gasps*
I love this idea!!!
That would be so hard for a mother thought to see her son go through all of that. 😭 And Bucky, after thinking she died, sees her again?? AH my heart.
But now I can see her just be such a mother to all the broken Avengers
YES!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Yeah…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
But…we kind of need everyone’s approval, like Min and Trailblazer and Acancello…speaking of Acancello, she hasn’t been on in a while. Should we wait?? or should we just go for it, lol
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic ✨ WIP Rant Chat!!! ✨ in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Oh and if you want to know spoilers, I will gladly indulge. XD Plus, Amir has a love interest if anyone wants to hear about that… 🥰
Sooo…what’s the big secret about Amir’s parents?
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic ✨ WIP Rant Chat!!! ✨ in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
@esther
I love the idea! I’ve always been a failure at writing blurbs, but yours sounds like a published book! Oooh, I love Dabir’s moodboard! The quote about time is so sad!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
It’s okay…I was more concerned about Hugo and Ottoline remaining a “thing”.
You can change your character if you want.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Oh, Rae, I meant just the next POV for the current RP! But that’s fine, it would be fun to do a new one!
We could have it so the characters at the “party” get teleported to the world via the house’s magical powers. Lol. I know that sounds stupid…but I kind of don’t want to start over, I think it would be fun if the story continues,…[Read more]
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