Janellebelovedpig

I’m bored. WE NEED MORE CHAOS!!!!!!

@jonas

Sorry I couldn’t help more! Plotting is just really new to me….so it’s hard to give good advice XD

…that everyone must stay ten miles away from them, or else…

@jonas

The website says that the Hook is the inciting incident (so maybe I plotted wrong, XD). Apparently the First Plot Point is the point of no return, where your character takes action and there’s no going back. It’s the first significant event of the story.

@acancello

I will!!! I love them so much <3

…their brains disintegrate with how easy it is and they become…

@jonas

Hmm. Good question. I’m not exactly sure how to explain it, partly because I don’t understand it that well. But from what I understand, the Hook is what grabs the reader’s attention. Like in my story, for example, the “hook” would be when Neveah gives birth to Hanna. It disrupts Sef’s natural world, however, it doesn’t really force her to…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

🤣 Eloy and Cass are the perfect brothers! Please tag me if you write/post more!

….in caves in the mountains, along the streets, anywhere that makes surviving as hard as possible…

@acancello

This is all I’ve written in the next chapter:

The next morning, Lilitu walked out of his room, wearing actual clothes this time.

He stopped dead in his tracks when he saw Sef sleeping on the couch. Then all the memories from last night came rushing back. Why was she here? What had happened? Where were his parents?

Sef’s green hair f…

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@savannah_grace2009

The ones Rae gave you are really good! Have you written the next chapter yet? (I want to see how this ends 🙂 )

@savannah_grace2009

 Hugo is so cute! I love him!!! (the ammount of times I’ve said that is concerning…)

Lol! Thank you!!

@jonas @highscribeofaetherium @thearcaneaxiom

Here’s my next chapter… if you have romance, LOOK AWAY lol!

Chapter 6: Raindrops

Lilitu was sitting on the steps, minding his own business, like any sensible person would do.

He was watching the wind sway the trees, listening to their whispers.

Often, he would sit and try to make sense of what…[Read more]

@rae

Lol!

@rae

Aww! So sweet!

@acancello

“Kiss for motivation?”

“In your dreams Walton.”

She roughly grabbed Hugo by the neck of his shirt and began to drag him towards the building, “Let’s get going!”

I love that!!! Hugo is so cute! I love him!!! (the ammount of times I’ve said that is concerning…)

@esther-c

Okay, yeah I get that. Naming chapters is hard!!!

Livia

“Yeah,” Liv agreed, “though that might not stop Xandro from going to Lukas.”

“Oh, dear,” Callie laughed.

“Is this the store?” Livia asked.

“Yep!” Callista said, and the three of them entered the store.

“I just hope they don’t have any restrictions on horses, because that might be a problem,” Liv whispered.

In this scene they are trying to break into a giant facility to save their family’s. Hugo being his annoying self, lol!

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“Now are you ready?” Hugo asked impatiently, testing the strength of the handcuffs.

She hesitated, “Yes, I think we are.”

“Kiss for motivation?”

“In your dreams Walton.”

She roughly grabbed Hugo by the neck of his…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Heres one scene! (ignore all the mistakes) It takes place just as they are about to get to the capital, Bermill.

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He turned to leave, just as the chair slid out from under Vikii, she shrieked and Hugo spun back towards her and caught her in his arms. “Hey, not too bad, huh?” he smiled, “Got better reflexes than you t…[Read more]