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@ellette-giselle

Ohhhh okay makes sense!

@savannah_grace2009

Oh I get that. I just mean there was no him thinking he was perfect at all. Like, it seemed to me, the reader,  that he was a humble and loving guy who wanted the best for sef and his brothers. There needs to be a little bit of that arogance showing. just a tiny bit. otherwise it’s not real. Ya know?

@highscribeofaetherium

That’s fair lol

@ellette-giselle

thanks!!! I’ve been having a lot of deep thoughts lately XD lol

I don’t think this was on your radar when Cass was first introduced, and in several of the early chapters. (am i right?) so, you need to show a little bit of that in him. just a teeny bit. Maybe he can’t stand it if one of hios brothers is better at him in som…

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@whalekeeper

Sooo

I think I have an idea for Lilitu’s internal conflict!

I’ve been plotting a lot today, if you couldn’t tell 😂

Sef is self depricating, like you said. She’s more like “I’m stupid. I’m worthless. I’m not worthy of love.”

What I did is prayed before developing characters today and asked God to show me verses to base the…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Oooooo I LOVE this!!!

Ok, one thing,

You see, Cass has a subconscious drive to pump himself up. He feels insecure about himself, so he manipulates situations in order to get people to look up to him or get praise. He doesn’t fully realize that he’s doing that to Sef, but it’s all a selfish desire to get those feeli…

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Oooooo I LOVE this!!!

Ok, one thing,

You see, Cass has a subconscious drive to pump himself up. He feels insecure about himself, so he manipulates situations in order to get people to look up to him or get praise. He doesn’t fully realize that he’s doing that to Sef, but it’s all a selfish desire to get those feelings of being important and a…

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@savannah_grace2009

Aw, that’s so sweet. It’s always so fun to find a character you can relate to!

Ah, thanks for the heads up! I’ll go see right now.

I’m just waiting for you to go to my WIP page and freak out XD XD

@ellette-giselle

I don’t see either, to be honest XD

I see myself in her. I love her personality and…idk, I just want to give her a hug, the poor girl 😭💔💗💗

@savannah_grace2009

Thank you so much!

You like Sabina? Do you see redemption in her, or are you just hoping?

@ellette-giselle

I love these scenes! You’re very talented, and I can see you have a passion for sharing Jesus through your writing! Keep it up!

Sabina is my favorite! 💗 (I also love her name)

@everyone

Okay.

For those of you sad and mad about Cass….

I have some spoilers.

So if you hate spoilers, LOOK AWAY

I’ve been brainstorming a lot about Cass’s character, and I have come to a decision.

Cass is a perfect example of how even strong Christians give up, how someone who appears to be a superchristian can fall and crumble under…[Read more]

K y’all, here’s the next part. @linus-smallprint @savannah_grace2009 @theshadow

As Aaron stood and spoke to the people, he knew this time something was different. He could feel the Lord working among them, and he could see in their expressions that their eyes were being opened.

By noon, several villagers had come to faith, and once it started, it…

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@linus-smallprint

Ah, yeah, I posted it several days ago and was like, “wonder where everyone is….” then I realized I didn’t tag y’all. lol.

Haha, I’m glad you enjoyed it. Sabina…. poor girl. You can see she loves her brother dearly, and she was very frightened for him. But, she also feels betrayed. Poor thing, she’s so tangled up…[Read more]

@theducktator

I feel like I should have some long drawn out post since one of my first for real novels was dystopian, but it seriously needs a lot of work, so I only have one short piece of advice for you. 😉

Don’t limit your scope. A lot of times dystopia takes place in a world/country similar to America, right? Don’t tie yourself down to tha…[Read more]

@esther-c

Oh no that’s ok! I’m glad you like it!!

@ellette-giselle
Yep! Sorry, my post was a little late, lol

@esther-c

I assume you’re speaking of Nathan?

Thank you! I’m glad you like it!