Janellebelovedpig

@theducktator

I’m down!!!

We just need more people lollll

You don’t have to do a “ship”

UM YES HE DOES

jk jk lol

@keilah-h

Aww tysm! As a new worldbuilder this means a lot 💕💕

You guys…I need to have “Does that make sense?” as my signature XD XD

@ellette-giselle

Sooo, I’ll have to see what you think, but I’ve been told by my beta readers that the first half of the book is about the situation Aaron is in, and the second half is about HIM personally. The first half sets the stage, the second half goes deep into the character. so, You’ll have to tell me what you think.

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@linus-smallprint

Aw, that’s sweet of you!! I bet she’ll love it!

No problem! Get to it whenever you can.

@linus-smallprint

You don’t have to do a “ship”

I didn’t for Against All Odds. I just skipped it. If you want some ideas, you can try listening to Sarah and my playlists.

I shall attempt to give advice in the best way possible. lol.

but it’s definitely out of my comfort zone!!!

Oh and about the names…

i’m soooo bad at names.

I literally just googled:

last names that mean water, plants, pain, etc.

So yeah. I know I’m a terrible worldbuilder and that should be a crime…but it works lol

@linus-smallprint @savannah_grace2009

sorry this took a minute! KP ate it and I only now just realized that it didn’t send. 🙁

The days passed, and Turin, Noah, Aaron, Darrien and the others continued to tell all they met of Christ’s love and sacrifice. Many did not want to listen, saying there was too much going on to consider such things. T…

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@linus-smallprint

Main Ship is like the main “couple” or romance. Even if neither of them fall in love…if people are “shipping” two of your characters together that means that they are rooting for your characters to fall in love.

So even if neither of them actually are a “thing”, the main ship could be the two characters that your readers seem…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

No, Eloy and Cassian are full brothers (idk if I said that right lol). They have the same mother and father– mother is Indie and father is Azazel. Lilitu was adopted, because his parents were Jraldath and Selena (AKA Kaden and Sevryn from the Prologue). The reason Lilitu isn’t part Pythonos is that he was born before his…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

I’m 21. The other guy is 20.

NO WONDER!! I’ve been thinking “how is he so good with his critiques!!”

@savannah_grace2009

Oh yes, and what Linus said about Aaron goofing off and doing the handstand on the border is what I mean about showing a LITTLE immaturity. If you make him a little…idk, funnier and give his personality mor…

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@linus-smallprint

Thanks, that makes me feel a little better 🙃😁😅😄

I’m 21. The other guy is 20

Ohhh that explains why your writing’s so good!!!! It all makes sense now!!! lol

I’m only 14…and it makes me mad when my writing’s not as good as older writers’…but then I have to slow down and remember that I’m doing good for the age I’m at and I h…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

There is one who Aaron kind of reminds me of who is a year younger than me, being 20 years old

Wait, you’re twenty? Or did I just completely misunderstand that.

Unless I missed something, this side of his personality has kind of disappeared since he met Turin.

I certainly will keep that in mind. I feel like none of the situations…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

You might not be able to give me world advice, but certainly you can help with other things, like if a paragraph just doesn’t make sense, or a character is going out of their personality, etc.

Plus, what I mostly need right now is to see how readers respond to the story itself. ya know.

I’ll send the next scene if you’re ready!

Okay, after reading this through again, I don’t think I’m the best person to give you critiques on this book.

You see, I’m really experienced in fantasy and sci fi (and half the time I don’t even know what I’m doing XD)

And a book like yours isn’t something that I’d probably pick up on my own.

In no way is this because of the book itself…it’s…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

ack! i messed up your tag. two messages above for you!

@savannah_grace2009

Ummmm I was the one who keeps getting your story COMPLETELY WRONG!!! Sorry again…….I feel soooo bad 😔😔

Don’t feel bad! It means I have a few things to make clearer. I won’t be around to correct every reader. lol.

(AND Aaron acts older than Turin XD)

Aaron is more mature then Turin.

I think I’d just like to see more of Aaron…

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