Janellebelovedpig

@linus-smallprint

I don’t think that will be too much of a problem. Aaron has stepped into a sort of parent roll with the children. (All of the young adults have.)

but seems you are heading in the direction of Aaron and Sabina getting married and being parents to Joseph.

So it seems.

@whalekeeper

Do you title your chapters or number them, by the way? Cuz I’m divided on the subject. I never read chapter titles for some reason, and just go in blind, hehe.

I actually do both. In the last book I published there was just numbers, and this one has titles. So yeah, it all depends on the story.

@keilah-h

Thank you so much! This is great.

@whalekeeper

Is formatting tedious or do you enjoy it? It sounds kind of fun lol. Like rearranging your room.

I really enjoy it! It’s the editing that can get a little tedious. The formatting is the fun part.

@whalekeeper

I completely disagree. But, that is just my conviction, and we don’t have to get into an argument. lol.

If you take God out, there isn’t any truth. Just saying. (and ESPECIALLY when it comes to finding peace and happiness.)

@theducktator

I LOVE THAT ONE!

Ok, here’s one that’s not about writing, but still super funny.

@keilah-h

You have all day tomorrow and some of Thursday to do it.

@keilah-h

Yeah, how about try to hit the deadline, and if you can’t we can take a vote on exstending

@rae

WOW! That is soooo neat! I need to try that out! It completely looked like watercolor!

@linus-smallprint

Aaron might see him as a little brother, but to Joseph Aaron stepped into the place of father when Joseph’s own father died on the walls. I think it might have been more of a big brother little brother relationship if Aaron hadn’t of been right there to fill that gap when Joseph lost his father.

Noah and Darrien have more of a…[Read more]

@rae

Oh tell me about it. I spend FOREVER with jaw lines. especially on guys. You’re brave to use paints!!! I get mad at them. They are too uncontrollable.

@linus-smallprint

Noah’s trickery, which he learned when gambling, has now become a way to entertain children. I like it!

YES! That’s what I was thinking!

Ah, the little boy who knows everything and has a ‘simple’ solution to every problem. I know this character. Remind me, how old is Joseph? 10 or 11, right?

haha! I LOVE Joseph. He is so funny…[Read more]

@rae

MAN that is amazing!! You are so good!

@linus-smallprint

Awesome. Haha, I do NOT work well with deadlines. (In case you didn’t notice, I always submit my stuff crazy early. lol)

@rae @theshadow @highscribeofaetherium @linus-smallprint @grcr  @keilah-h

Good grief! Y’all are cutting it close!

I set the due-date for the 21st, and it’s the 19th. Should I extend the time? So far I only have one drawing…….

@rae

Well I don’t just mean that for publishing. I mean for anything you write that others may read! Whoever they are!

@linus-smallprint @keilah-h

Ok, here is the next section.

One night, as Aaron sat studying his Bible in the room he shared with Noah and Darrien, a timid nock came on the door.

“Come in,” said Aaron, without looking up.

The door creaked open and quiet steps pattered across the floor and came to the small table where Aaron sat. A hand tou…

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@linus-smallprint @keilah-h

K, I added anther as well.

One afternoon Aaron and Noah returned from doing a few odd jobs for a friend in exchange for a new pair of boots. When they came in sight of the orphanage, the door crashed open and out tumbled Joseph and several other boys. “Noah! Noah do a trick!” cried Asher.

“A trick?” asked Noah. “…

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@linus-smallprint @keilah-h

It looks like you two are the only ones left! I wrote a short scene to fill in the gap left by time passage, and I wondered what y’all thought.

It wasn’t long before Darrien came home with a little boy and girl in tow. They were twins, about nine or ten years old.

Aaron and the rest were in the kitchen talking when D…

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@rae

Wow! This is making me want to read the whole thing!!!

Okay, I do have a thought. As Christians authors  we have a voice, and so when given the chance I think we should use it to point to Christ. Sooo, where is that in your book? Anyone can write a story about finding happiness. Your character is searching for peace and happiness, and…[Read more]