Janellebelovedpig

@freed_and_redeemed

I LOVED  it this was so so good freedom!!!

I caught quite a few grammatical errors and typos but I’m guessing you’re not done editing. If you want me to go back and mark them I can.

other then that, amazing job!! I CANNOT WAIT for the next book!!

@mineralizedwritings

k, I finished up mine.

@freed_and_redeemed

of course you can ask for a character!! You’ll just have to see who all’s in line. 😉

@linus-smallprint

By the way do you remember mentioning that you had a friend who tried to make an account but couldn’t end up getting on here? The same thing happened to me, and after waiting around for two months, I finally conta…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Rory

Hunter was friendly, even if he was part dragon. He also seemed just a little bit shy. Rory didn’t mind the feel of the claw against his hand so much.

Hunter was thinking about the next part of the question, his tail lashing thoughtfully. “I, uh…We were enrolled in this school at our old guardian’s request. She was nice……[Read more]

@keilah-h

Btw, I haven’t had so much fun in a LONG time! 😀

@keilah-h

Rory

The winged boy had lowered his hand. He had given a name. Hunter. Rory forced himself not to flinch at every movement Hunter made. He’s not an enemy. He’s not going to try and kill you. Still keeping an eye on the claws, Rory took a step forward. “No worries, I just have never seen a guy with wings or… or claws…” he…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Did I do it right, or did I not introduce him the way I was supposed to?

@linus-smallprint

Most of that was just for fun to get you back for your reaction to the way I imagined Turin

*gasp* How could you!? At least I didn’t imagine Alan with a BEARD and I got his AGE right! That’s what really matters. *sniffs in sophisticated British manner*

I guessed you were joking. lol.

K, I have another drawing and It’s fan-art for none of you. So there.

Lol.

@linus-smallprint

That was so scathing yet grateful that I don’t know whether to laugh or cry. lolololol.

Good grief. You are hard to please.

I was board. That’s what you get.

Maybe if I was actually trying I would do it better.

mid-late 19th-century styles

Good grief! That’s a left fielder.

@linus-smallprint

Yes…….

@grcr

I can’t wait to see yours!

*Cringe* Don’t get your hopes up……….

@grcr

GIRL! YOU QUOTE!! I loved that part of Freedom’s Fire! That is such a good quote!!

The drawing is amazing too! Mine is sitting on the table waiting to be shaded. I’m gonna try to do it today. YIKES! I hit against the deadline. Rephrase. I am GOING to do it today.

@theshadow

okay, I really like this, but I have one big thing.

the training fight.

so first off, they would use training swords. Wooden ones or maybe blunt mettle. Mistakes happen in training and the less chance for a knight to get killed the better.
second, training is hard on the weapons so their real swords would be set aside for…[Read more]

Oops, sorry @theshadow I forgot to tag you

@theducktator

Oh. You’re absolutely right. *Facepalms*

@esther-c @theducktator @folith-feolin @trailblazer @grcr

Okay! I have finally remembered (or was reminded by The Ducktator) that it is now time to discuss the book! So what did you think? What did you find interesting? Is there anything you’d like to point out?

Also: sorry I took so long.…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Oh goodness.

Okay, how about…… draw Steve Rogers aka Captain America.It’s the first thing that came to mind and the image killed me.

@keilah-h @whalekeeper

Thanks! Ooo, this sounds great! Oh poor Pax! I will be on his side no matter what. lol.

How many character can I have?

I’ll start with one of my favorites.

Rory is sixteen years old. He’s been trained as a soldier since he was six and would now be a Lieutenant among his own people. He’s slender but strong, has wavy…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Lol.

So, what do I do?

I feel stupid, but I’ve never done anything like this before. haha

Very cautiously peeks into school…..

Is this kinda already fully developed, or can I give it a little try?