Janellebelovedpig

@liberty

Ok! Thanks for the offer! 🤗

@theshadow

Everyone else had some fantastic points and I agree. God does everything with a purpose, and one of those purpose is to bring glory to His name. The angels were made to do God’s will and serve Him, right? Satan didn’t want to, yet time and time again we see Satan’s plans thwarted and God glorified. I like how Andrew put it:

God knew…

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@loopylin

I don’t write animal characters. I can’t get into it like people. lol.

Thanks for the invite!

@whalekeeper

Hey, sorry it took a minute.

How detailed does that usually get?

Oh it depends. Sometimes I only have 4 or so points, and sometimes it’s close to 16. It just all depends on what points I know I need/want to hit.

What do you mean by graphing characters?

I have a sheet with the character’s name at the top. Then I add age,…[Read more]

@hybridlore   @koshka

Don’t rub it in.

@whalekeeper

I do bullet points and make sure I know the key points, the beginning, climax, and end. Then I graph out my characters. Other then that, I don’t do too much planning as long as I have a solid plot idea in my head.

@hybridlore   @koshka

having hybridlore on the protection squad is scary! Why did I ever tell her about it?

@hybridlore   @koshka

okay!! Fine!! I give in.

I’ll rewrite that whole scene tomorrow.

y’all win.

*slams down pencil in despair.*

it actually won’t hurt the plot much, and you are actually making sense.

fine. I’ll do it.

they go free. Both of them.

I can’t believe I’m doing this.

@hybridlore

Yes you are you little…. little…… I don’t know what you are.

Dangerous person.

@whalekeeper

Lol. I’m having a great day. Having a lot of fun plotting my next book and building character boards and aesthetics.

@hybridlore

Oh good grief.

I’m gonna do it.

I’m gonna save him.

Eric’s gonna live.

How on earth did you get me to do that?

I can’t believe I’m going to do this.

You are dangerous.

@whalekeeper

She’s the first person to ever get me to reconsider killing a character.

@hybridlore

True. I’m not denying that he isn’t young. He’s just not shockingly young. Especially in that age and culture, he’s considered a man and could have a family and kids.

Eric is still a kid in there eyes.

And no, i can’t change the age because i’d have to do rewrites in the first book and I don’t want to. lol. plus, that makies him…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Hmm. I guess I was trying to cross over the LTBL goal into this without clearly stating that. It’s hard, because Joseph has a tendency to lean toward a survival mindset (no one can really blame him) and the story is his POV.

UGH, I can see the Eric thing both ways. I could still use his almost death as a “wakeup call” and it…[Read more]

@hybridlore

He’s not THAT young. Adrian was younger then him when he died.

@hybridlore

Look, if you can get at least two more people on this forum to agree with you……….

lololol

@hybridlore

Stop it.

Go away.

I literally have my finger hanging over the delete button for that scene.

@hybridlore

I don’t know……… what would I even do with him if he survived?

(Besides get him married and all that.)

@hybridlore

But I already submitted it this way. I can’t change it now, KP won’t let me edit that post……………

@hybridlore

Oh shut up.

You’re actually going to convince me to save him.

lolololol.