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Ok that makes sense! 😉 Yeah, I could always take a snippet of it and write it how I would interpret a four year old thinking through that if you wanted an example. (i don’t know if that’s weird or not 😂)

Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 9 months ago

@esther-c

I actually did post one in the snowball fight.

I’ll re-post it here for you if you like.

Liam didn’t seem to agree, but he let the matter go.

They were silent a moment. Then, Liam started coughing. It was a small cough at first, but it grew harsher and stronger. “Easy, easy,” Werner said, carefully helping Liam to sit up. He whipp…

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Esther replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 9 months ago

@peoplessss

Sharing the three moodboards from my current WIP! (First is the book moodboard, then Clayton, then Audrey)

SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago

@esther-c

I don’t know how a four year old thinks hahaha

honestly I had really deep thoughts for a little kid and I have always thought really complex, so it seems realistic to me XDXD

I will work on it!!!

Esther replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 9 months ago

@ellette-giselle

Ok….Werner looks like he’d be a favorite character of mine… 🤭 Lmk if you post any snippets of him!!

Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 9 months ago

@freed_and_redeemed @liberty

Maria!!!!!!

Esther replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago

@savannah_grace2009

Oooh, I like it!! My only critique is the first half of the chapter…. It was great until I found out Sef was only 4 at this point. It just felt a little too complex to be coming from a 4 year old, ya know? Maybe simplify it somehow? Keep the same emotions that Sef is feeling, but see if you can bring it down to a 4 year o…[Read more]

Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 9 months ago

@liberty

But I loved the tragedy! It was so sweet and so sad! It made is seem almost more meaningful.