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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
I know. I don’t know why they keep coming off blurry.
Joseph’s was a little blurry… but… I think I saw a picture of him handcuffed against a wall… 😳
*wiggles eyebrows* guess you’ll just have to see……………
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
But everything has been fine sailing and I think I need some summing to keep people interested.
Idk.
we’ll see.
Oh no… 😥
lol.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @grcr
Next section.
The days passed and Joseph worked hard to build furniture for their home. He found woodworking trying at times, but David and Stephen helped him.
Amelia began to bring over blankets and dishes she had saved, and men and women of the church gave…
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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic Do you celebrate Christmas? in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 8 months ago
Yes, I celebrate Christmas. Being Catholic, I also do advent during December. It’s a time of reflection and preparation for Christ’s coming. Christmas for my family and I is when we rejoice because Jesus came to Earth, and when we remember His birth and His love for us.
However, my parents have decided to abandon certain Christmas…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Do you celebrate Christmas? in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 8 months ago
Yes, we celebrate Christmas! We Celebrate it as a remembrance of the birth of our Savior and in anticipation of His return. (I’m a Covenanter/Reformed Baptist)
Here is a really, really amazing interview about Christmas done by a pastor and famous Christian actor. It is so good and I like to watch it every year. I think it’s only…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
No I am immediately suspicious of his Master.
Good scene! I like it!
Go ahead.
Just see what happens to you if you do.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @grcr
Amelia
(I hope to have Stephen and David soon)

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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Saw a movie with this in recently and it was painful.
Don’t get me started.
I have some of the boards done. Not all of them tho.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
sounds good. Again, it’s your book. But, for me the spell images being described or not would be the difference between me putting down the series at this book or continuing if I had bought the book or checked it out in their library.
CP == Christian Perspective?
haha! That’s a good one to watch movies with always. No, Cle…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @grcr
Anybody want to see some Character Aesthetics?!?!?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
SEVENTH TIME IT DELETED MY POST. GRRRR
You can’t separate spell casting from demonic power. The Bible makes that clear. So, if wyou want the spell casting, your going to have to keep the other part in mind.
Okay, I got through about twenty seconds of the first song.
FF!!!! I love Final Fantasy soundtrack! XV is my…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Are you okay in the forum Questions and Support 1 year, 8 months ago
So, whenever I’m overwhelmed, whether by emotions or circumstances, or just whatever, I have to remind myself that God is there and He cares and wants me to turn to Him for help. I understand it’s not easy for everyone to talk to a God that they can’t physically see or hear, but He’s there, Kefa. He wants you to come to Him wit…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
beast.
Fine. I’ll write. I feel like I am everyone’s target. *sigh*
@liberty (because I’m nice and you like my story. lol)
Josef looked down. “It’s complicated. I didn’t choose this. I’m just… trying to survive like everyone else.
Franz shook his head bitterly. “Survive? By enforcing fear?”
Josef dropped his voic…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Hmm. well, first of all the fact that the church has stopped being attacked. Then a reference Sabina made in her letter about the soldiers being super tense. Then Joseph notices the same thing.
Hmm. I wounder how true this will turn out to be.
Haha,
Poor Joseph. I completely understand his reaction to this.
I know poor…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
I like it, but I’m confused about her age. She acts about five. Maybe eight if you want to stretch it. But I thought you said she was a teen. If she is, (why does she have such childish dialogue) and how is she hugging Baron around the legs? is he a giant?
Other then that, I really liked it! It’s a very sweet scene.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @grcr
NEXT SECTION!
“Joseph, what if I displease you?”
Joseph and Amelia were sitting on the steps in what had become their normal place for talking. They were watching as David and Stephen played ball with the younger boys. Joseph had just finished playin…
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