Janellebelovedpig

@linus-smallprint

Merry Christmas!!!

Oh I saw that coming! This is good, Linus. I do have one complaint.

 

This is an emotional moment, but I don’t see much emotion in Alan’s prayer.

I would suggest pausing in between fragments of prayer and describing what Alan is doing and feeling in that moment.

Exactly. This was just what I was thi…[Read more]

@janellebelovedpig

That’s beautiful!

@liberty

yes!!! Yes it is!! The profile is Cora and the banner is the cover!!

have you read it!?!?

@liberty

oh me too! I love the redemption characters!!

wait! Rolf Klaus!! Not Rolf Klaus from The Baker Family Adventures?!?!

oh yes, I have often thought of that. I find so many aspects of writing a small reflection of God and us.

@whalekeeper

oh I was mostly teasing. Lol. 😂

I would never be comfortable in a place like that from what it sounds like, but Rory might go just because he has no idea what is going on and what a dance even is. lol.

we’ll see if he ends up peeking in there.

“Do you want some lip gloss, buddy?”

-My sister, again

“IT LOOKS JUST LIKE A REAL PIG!”

-My sister

No context *laughs*

I won’t tell y’all exactly who said this, but Xmas day:

“My burps smell like cookies and I need something healthy”

@linus-smallprint

Hmmmm the challenge which all of us Christian writers face…writing good scenes where the characters pray.

I’m not going to pretend to be good at this.

However, I do have a couple things to point out.  Firstly, I noticed that you like to write down the entire prayer in italics like the character’s thoughts. Now, this…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Merry Christmas!

@keilah-h

I agree!!!

WHATTTTT

twenty seven!!!!

that’s crazy!

@keilah-h

The beginning has changed SO. MUCH.

The storyline/plot is pretty similar, but it’s definitely different…

@liberty

Nope. No redemption for Hans. Plenty of chances in the book I read, but he turns them all down.

@elishavet-pidyon

GIRL! That is insanely good!

@grcr

I like it

@liberty

How about checking back with everyone Jan. 1st?

@savannah_grace2009

I’m so glad to hear that!