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koshka

Sorry. I think I just got blood all over Leo’s uniform. lol.

@whalekeeper   @koshka

Rory

Rory tightened his hold on Leo’s arm. “But why? what do you stand to gain?” He forced his voice to remain steady, trying to ignore the blood that dripped from his fingers onto the cobblestones.

@whalekeeper

*barnes seems to have a thing for ripping clothing. lol*

@koshka

Rory

For a moment Rory felt like he was going to be sick. He knew he could never run, and even if he could possible force his body to move that would mean leaving Leo. He looked at the woman for a long time. At last, he spoke. “Why?”

@koshka

*gasp*

Oh my goodness! Are you okay!

*covers mouth to hide  laughter*

@koshka

*blink*

That is depressingly funny.

@whalekeeper

Ah, I get it. Not like I’ve done that before

@koshka

Same! I average about five to ten to every 300 or so pages. I doubt people notice all of them, but I still go crazy.

@koshka   @whalekeeper

Rory

The sound of screeching tires flashed through his mind. Hand pushing him. Pain. Blood. Yelling.

But she had saved him.

Saved his life.

Yeah, saved me so the Agents could finish the job after interrogating me.

Rory bit his lower lip until he tasted blood. At last he let out a slow breath and looked up at Leo. “…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

YIPPY!

(though Rory won’t think so lol)

oh no! what happened?

@koshka

go ahead and hook up with her then. she’s probably just outside. Maybe give Rory a little warning tho. lol.

@koshka

Rory

“I said cracked, not punctured… or broken…” Rory mumbled, but he let Leo help him to the door. They slipped outside into the cool night. Rory took in a slow breath and blinked, looking around him at the dim streets. I wonder if the agents are still out here? The thought made him grip Leo tighter. “Which direction?” And before…[Read more]

@koshka

If we involve Barns we have to stop RPing until she replies.

Ya know, we could just go out the back door which she’s not guarding, and then if whaley still wants to join us it would be an easy thing for Barnes to find us again.

Rory

Rory shook his head and put his hand against the wall, slowly pushing himself up. “I’m fine. I’ll…[Read more]

@koshka

“I… I don’t know where… all over…” Rory blinked several times. Leo’s hands were against his face. “I feel sick,” Rory grimaced. He wasn’t sure if it was the emotions, the spent adrenaline, or the amount of times he had been hit. “The Agents had me back there,” he said slowly. He rubbed the back of his hand over his eyes, smearing…[Read more]

@koshka

Rory

Rory followed Leo’s gaze and saw the picture of a young man. He looked weary and depressed. He was making his way down a dusty road, his head bowed. But, just beyond him, a man was running down the front walk of a grand mansion, his arms open wide. Rory leaned on his arm, and his eyes drifted back to the picture of the shepherd. He…[Read more]

@koshka

(I’m gonna cry! I want a Leo in my life! Where’s my Leo? 😭)

Rory

Something inside Rory broke at Leo’s words and tears spilled down his face. Not the violent, desperate, broken sobs he had cried before, but gentle tears. The way Leo’s hand rested on the shoulder, the way it had felt against his forehead–– Rory had never known any…[Read more]

@keilah-h

THE FIRST ONE!!

Talk about that after you PUBLISH the book! You’ve read it a thousand times and so has your editor, you both read the first printed copy, catch all those mistakes, and then you make the big order and start selling them, only to see mistakes! *sobbing*

@linus-smallprint

So what are your thoughts on this magic system? Since I want to write a story with a way that deals with intrusive thoughts that more people can be comfortable with reading, I want to know how I can make more of you comfortable with it. (I do recognize that there will always be someone out there who will be disturbed by it, but I…

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@koshka

wonderful!

@linus-smallprint

I think it was a combination fo the letter and how Amelia was protesting at the beginning that she was not having plague symptoms.

hmm. Okay, do you think I should take out that part in the letter? Or should I just leave it and let the reader be happy that they guessed a plot twist or else shocked that they didn’t see…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Thank you again. I would like to do this with the illustrations in the Narnia books someday.

That would be AWESOME! Oh you really, really need to do that!!!! Oh that WOULD BE SO COOL! Please do, and post them on her and tag me!!

@linus-smallprint

Thank you for taking my feedback so graciously. It’s hard having stances like this, (and many others) that seem silly or foolish. I think you’re the first person to take something like this that I said and not turn around and try to bite my head off or attack me. A lot of times people will ask me questions like this, and I’m…[Read more]