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@linus-smallprint

Is it bad that it was reversed?

I’m not convinced by Julian telling Dian the gospel in that moment

Ugh.

I had that feeling as I was editing it.

Hmm…. I might possibly chuck that section altogether………..

So is it bad that Julian responded differently?

Well….. I think that might be because that tends to be w…[Read more]

@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @liberty

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Leon woke in the darkness. He heard Rolf breathing and felt the rocking of the ship below him. He sat up, wondering where they were going and what fate lay ahead. Leon leaned against the side of the ship’s hold and drew his knees to his chest,…

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@linus-smallprint

The drawings are great! Especially love the one with Alan and Martha

@liberty

I think so! Send it!

@whalekeeper

Wyoh keeps eating whatever I have to say…*copies this post*

Anyways, I’m interviewing you for Potato News 64 so check that out XD

@whaley

Those are hilarious–

Are we sure that superhero has good intintions?

@liberty

Yeah I know. At first I could never see it fitting, but the more I listened to it the more I kept thinking about these guys, (specifically Leon for some reason) so now it has to be the book theme song, because I think about them every time. 😂

Ah, I get it.

We didn’t do Aladdin because of the clothing the girls are wearing. I have…[Read more]

@liberty

Who?

I’ve killed a lot……

Also, what do you think of the song?

@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint       @liberty

Look y’all, whatever you may think…. this is actually the truth.

@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint      @liberty

How about this one?

@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @liberty

For all those it may concern…. I would call this the theme song if this book.

@whalekeeper

Probably for doing dirty work. *shrug* basically completing tasks that the main villain doesn’t want to (or can’t)

@hybridlore     @linus-smallprint

Hey, that kind of stuff even happens here in America.

I took a class out of the home with several home school kids. It was a Constitutional class, and at one point we were debating real court cases or arguing pro or con real things.

Well, I was put on a team with three of the guys, (that class was heavily out…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Oh my goodness! That’s adorable!!!

@whalekeeper

Don’t have them there just for the sake of stupidity. Don’t make it look like all you want its stupidness and so you’re throwing in characters with the roll of being stupid.

They have to have a point and a reason.

@the_lost-journal

Don’t worry–I’m a professional. Interviewing disturbing criminals is how I make a living.

(@whalekeeper lemme just share a document with you that NOBODY ELSE, you hear me NOBODY ELSE is allowed to access. Here you go: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_D2daneyR8ztLjBodCE4cVYL5X25DHBosvwc6hl3n_U/edit?usp=sharing )

@the_lost-journal

*calls the news station*

Oh, hi, I’m Stephie! I’m so passionate about protecting potatoes. You know, I’m an expert in therapeutics and in neuropsychology. My specific area of interest is in psychopaths. I’m currently writing a book about how they work, and I’ve been interviewing the most dangerous criminals in order to compile…[Read more]

@rae

YAY!!!!!

Oh man!! That really got to me!!!

I am someone who loves large chunks of scripture in stories, but if it feels too long maybe break it up a little and have shorter passages with some “…” filling the sections that don’t directly pertain to the story.

YES! It felt very legit!

One of my favorite!!

@hybridlore

Well, I’ve never seen that movie. Just heard of it. And I like the song “Speechless” but other than that I know nothing of it besides it taking place in Arabia.  lololol.

@liberty

But that IS how I feel!!!!