Janellebelovedpig

@esther-c

Lolollol.

Ready??!……. You’re not gonna believe it……….

Mexican.

@ellette-giselle
No way!!! That’s insane!!! 😱 Oh my goodness that’s so funny!! 😂😂 That’s so crazyyyy. Wait what did her husband fiance look like??

@hybridlore  @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @liberty

 

NEXT SECTION!!!

 

Days passed, and slowly, Leon regained some of the strength he had lost. On the second week, he was told he could work if he wanted to, and he did so with a will. It was wonderful to be with Rolf again, and the work was not draining a…

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@koshka

I’m glad it worked!!

Yes, poor Conrad.

 

🤨 That’s odd….. I feel like I said he DIDN’T cry. I can remember several times he would have, but he couldn’t. And there was the one time at the end where he cried, but I alluded to the fact that it would have been more sound than tears.

Maybe I’m missing something………..

@esther-c

 

Hey guess what?!?

 

I just ran into your character Hallie the other day!!! NO LIE! She looked EXACTLY like the face claim, she had the same personality from what I’ve read of your book!!!!

 

It was driving me crazy! She and her fiance were visiting our church and I grantee you I kept sneaking glances at her. She had on a black…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Ohhh I get that 😂

Right now it’s a little easier “writing” since most of it is editing and moving scenes and such since this is a second draft, but *shrug* sometimes I just don’t have that inspiration, ya know?

Oh wait! You haven’t heard about this WIP yet!!

Ok I’m dropping the moodboards, hang tight.

@godlyfantasy12

She’s g o n e *cue dramatic spooky music*

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Just not forever 🤪 Or maybe she’s actually writing like I should be doing &#x1f…

@grcr

i’ve got your nose.

🫢

THAT’s where it went 👀

OK I”M BACK

I was over here like, “I’m here!” And then I got called to dinner 😑😂

@godlyfantasy12

I ammmm

but idk for how much longer, lol

@linus-smallprint

😭😢

 

It’s okay…. I understand.

@loopylin @keilah-h
I’ve never used Discord, but I’m open to it!! I wasn’t aware you could have separate channels and such.

Keilah, Slack is mostly used for businesses, but I’ve also been a part of a writing camp that uses it and it works pretty well. The only problem is that if we use the free version, the message history is only 90 days.

@hybridlore

Awesome!! I’m so glad you liked it!!!

 

Yeah….. Rolf had a rough time of it, but he got out sooner, whereas Leon was in the bad situation longer… things just didn’t escalate so high.

 

btw, was it you who asked about him changing his name? Well, if it was, you now have an answer!

@freed_and_redeemed

Love it!!

Also was not expecting Erich! I need to know how he joined the American army!!!

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NEXT SECTION!!!

Interesting POV switch. A new technique I tried out for telling long stories rather then having a ton of first-person dialogue. Let me know what y’all think.

 

The sixteenth year of Emperor Haidronias’s reign
September 9th
The Empire<…

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@theshadow

 

Oooo!! I like this!! This is getting good!

 

And, what if, what if we don’t make it?

This is a little cluncky because of the punctuation. If you did: “And what if–– what if we don’t make it?” or “And what if. . . what if we don’t make it?” either of those would work well. Use the dash if you want it to read as a sudden horrif…[Read more]

@keilah-h

@hybridlore

Thanks you two.

 

As for online, I don’t trust it. I’ve heard and seen too many online things get hacked for my liking. 😅

Thanks for the suggestion though!

Or if we can’t do Slack find another free platform where we can have separate channels/forums to keep everything organized