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Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 1 year, 8 months ago
@elanor
Amen. “The Lord is not slow about His promise, as some count slowness, but is patient toward you, not wishing for any to perish but for all to come to repentance.”
2 Peter 3:9
“For to me, to live is Christ and to die is gain. But if I am to live on in the flesh, this will mean fruitful labor for me; and I do not know which to choose.…[Read more]
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Janellebelovedpig posted a new activity comment 1 year, 8 months ago
Cool. One of my favorite essays in school was on Florence Nightingale. What have yours been on?
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Janellebelovedpig posted an update 1 year, 8 months ago
Happy Resurrection Sunday!!
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Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic He is Risen!!!!! ⭐️ in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
@esther-c @everyone
Happy Easter! He has risen indeed! My life will never be the same because Jesus Christ has risen from the dead!!
“this Man, delivered over by the predetermined plan and foreknowledge of God, you nailed to a cross by the hands of godless men and put Him to death. But God raised Him up again, putting an end to the agony of…[Read more]
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Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic Poem Advice on Punctuation in the forum Poetry Critiques 1 year, 8 months ago
🙃That moment you realize you read the comments and they meant a whole lot to you, but you never responded to them.😁🤗 Thank you so much for your feedback! You all are awesome.
I’m getting ready to post my next section in the allegory; I’ll try to tag you!
*Happy gasp* Another allegory writer! What’s yours about?
Awh, thank…[Read more]
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Janellebelovedpig posted an update 1 year, 8 months ago
Welcome to Kingdom Pen! I am Janelle. What’s your favorite thing you have written?
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Janellebelovedpig posted an update 1 year, 8 months ago
@freedomwriter76
A while ago you were loving another KP member and shared that you sometimes have trouble forgiving yourself. I wanted you to know that I’m proud of you for encouraging the other member and supporting her. I also wanted you to know that you are not alone.I am so thankful that I have never seen it to be the character of God that…[Read more]
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Janellebelovedpig posted an update 1 year, 8 months ago
I know you are off KP right now, but I wanted to let you know that I saw your post a while ago about how failures are hard and wanted to let you know that I am proud of you for asking for prayer and reaching out and that you are not alone.
I am so thankful that I have never seen it to be the character of God that He would…[Read more] -
Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 1 year, 8 months ago
This is based off of Deuteronomy 8:2-3
Journey on and don’t forget
the One by Whom you’ve been led,
the One by Whom you’ve been fed
Wand’ring in the wilderness.
Remember the road marked with tears
Yet held year to year
by your Guide Who loves you dear
Journey on and don’t forget.
Up and through and by and with
In dark storms or…
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Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 1 year, 8 months ago
Awh, your poem is so good! I can picture all the friendship and love. You said it was from a prompt. Is it inspired by one of your friends?
I love your poem! I too love thinking about God’s blessings and His ways of coming on the scene and bringing transformations.
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Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic Poem Advice on Punctuation in the forum Poetry Critiques 1 year, 8 months ago
Thank you, Esther! This is for the next part in the allegory!
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Janellebelovedpig started the topic Poem Advice on Punctuation in the forum Poetry Critiques 1 year, 8 months ago
@acancello @esther-c @felicity @any other poets or poetesses.
I can’t figure out how to punctuate throughout and also at the end of the lines. Thoughts?
The fear of the Lord is clean, enduring forever
Desirable far beyond refined gold
Thy judgments are true, righteous altogether
Sweeter than the sweetest honeycomb
Turning simple to…[Read more]
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Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 1 year, 8 months ago
Wow! That was really good!
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Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 1 year, 8 months ago
Sometimes I write prayers as poems/songs:
Thank You Lord that I’m no longer
lost as to my future
or hopeless as to my past.
the pain, terrors, fears and failures I thought would last
instead have melted away
in the light of the rays
of Your wondrous grace
and mercies new with the dawn.
Or little devotional thoughts:
When in the…
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Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic The story game…. in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
(@acancello Fun idea!)
As I watched this girl, I wondered what her secret was. There she was walking through the park in front of my house while I watched from my front porch. She seemed on a mission. She had a purpose in her steps. A smile gently curled the edges of her mouth as she thought about it. I stood up slowly, wondering if I could…[Read more]
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Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 1 year, 8 months ago
I write poetry! And songs, which are basically poems with a melody.
Actually, the next part in Little One’s Journey will involve one of my poems, sort of like how J.R.R.Tolkien puts songs and things in the Hobbit and LOTR and also how Hannah Hurnard puts songs and poems in Hind’s Feet on High Places.
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Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic Little One's Journey… title pending in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
@kyronthearcanin @acancello @esther-c
Thanks so much! XD Your encouragement means a lot. -
Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic Little One's Journey… title pending in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
@esther-c @freedomwriter76 @acancello @kyronthearcanin @whoever-else-is-welcome-to-chime-in
And here’s part 3:
All day long Little One tried to catch Loving Prudence alone, but the siblings always seemed to be around. Then just before supper Little One saw her chance.
As Little One stepped into the kitchen, Loving Prudence looked up from her…[Read more]
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Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic Little One's Journey… title pending in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
esther-c @freedomwriter76 @acancello @kyronthearcanin @whoever-else-is-welcome-to-chime-in
Part 2 is out now! Thanks for reading! 🤗
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Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic Little One's Journey… title pending in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
Part 2!
All through supper Little One tried to focus on her siblings’ conversation. She tried to be normal, but her Bag of Entertained Thoughts felt so heavy, she kept figeting with it. If anyone noticed, no one seemed bothered.
That night Little One could hardly sleep, haunted by images of Undiscerned at work stoking and bellowing the burning…[Read more]
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I love my essays on hard topics I most recently wrote ablut mental health