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Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 3 years ago
This is based off of Deuteronomy 8:2-3
Journey on and don’t forget
the One by Whom you’ve been led,
the One by Whom you’ve been fed
Wand’ring in the wilderness.
Remember the road marked with tears
Yet held year to year
by your Guide Who loves you dear
Journey on and don’t forget.
Up and through and by and with
In dark storms or…
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Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 3 years ago
Awh, your poem is so good! I can picture all the friendship and love. You said it was from a prompt. Is it inspired by one of your friends?
I love your poem! I too love thinking about God’s blessings and His ways of coming on the scene and bringing transformations.
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Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic Poem Advice on Punctuation in the forum Poetry Critiques 3 years ago
Thank you, Esther! This is for the next part in the allegory!
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Janellebelovedpig started the topic Poem Advice on Punctuation in the forum Poetry Critiques 3 years ago
@acancello @esther-c @felicity @any other poets or poetesses.
I can’t figure out how to punctuate throughout and also at the end of the lines. Thoughts?
The fear of the Lord is clean, enduring forever
Desirable far beyond refined gold
Thy judgments are true, righteous altogether
Sweeter than the sweetest honeycomb
Turning simple to…[Read more]
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Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 3 years ago
Wow! That was really good!
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Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 3 years ago
Sometimes I write prayers as poems/songs:
Thank You Lord that I’m no longer
lost as to my future
or hopeless as to my past.
the pain, terrors, fears and failures I thought would last
instead have melted away
in the light of the rays
of Your wondrous grace
and mercies new with the dawn.
Or little devotional thoughts:
When in the…
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Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic The story game…. in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
(@acancello Fun idea!)
As I watched this girl, I wondered what her secret was. There she was walking through the park in front of my house while I watched from my front porch. She seemed on a mission. She had a purpose in her steps. A smile gently curled the edges of her mouth as she thought about it. I stood up slowly, wondering if I could…[Read more]
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Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 3 years ago
I write poetry! And songs, which are basically poems with a melody.
Actually, the next part in Little One’s Journey will involve one of my poems, sort of like how J.R.R.Tolkien puts songs and things in the Hobbit and LOTR and also how Hannah Hurnard puts songs and poems in Hind’s Feet on High Places.
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Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic Little One's Journey… title pending in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
@kyronthearcanin @acancello @esther-c
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Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic Little One's Journey… title pending in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
@esther-c @freedomwriter76 @acancello @kyronthearcanin @whoever-else-is-welcome-to-chime-in
And here’s part 3:
All day long Little One tried to catch Loving Prudence alone, but the siblings always seemed to be around. Then just before supper Little One saw her chance.
As Little One stepped into the kitchen, Loving Prudence looked up from her…[Read more]
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Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic Little One's Journey… title pending in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
esther-c @freedomwriter76 @acancello @kyronthearcanin @whoever-else-is-welcome-to-chime-in
Part 2 is out now! Thanks for reading! 🤗
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Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic Little One's Journey… title pending in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
Part 2!
All through supper Little One tried to focus on her siblings’ conversation. She tried to be normal, but her Bag of Entertained Thoughts felt so heavy, she kept figeting with it. If anyone noticed, no one seemed bothered.
That night Little One could hardly sleep, haunted by images of Undiscerned at work stoking and bellowing the burning…[Read more]
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Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
Wow! I’m on the edge of my seat! Nicely done, Solfyre!
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Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic Little One's Journey… title pending in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
Awh, y’all are so awesome! Thank you. That makes my day. I’m excited to keep sharing it with you!
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Janellebelovedpig posted an update 3 years ago
@esther-c
@freedomwriter76
@acancello
@kyronthearcaninHave you ever made a fanfic off of the Bible? (Or, I guess it would be more historical fiction.) I haven’t, but I think doing the research of digging into the Word would be super cool!
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I have, actually, kind of just for fun. It was roughly 1500 words because I was entering it in a contest thingy. I called it Two-hundred and Seventy-Six because it was from one of the crew member’s perspectives in the story where Euroclydon smashed Paul’s ship to Rome, and yet they all survived. The sailor I used for an MP was pretty skeptical the…[Read more]
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I have so many ideas for Biblical fiction!! 😂 Someday, I’d love to actually write it. XD
I’d love to write about: Simon Peter, Rhoda, one of Jesus’ siblings, and Esther.
Obviously, that would take a lot of work, so I haven’t expanded upon it. (The most I did was make a moodboard for Simon Peter. 😁)-
And I have more ideas that I can’t remember right now. XD
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Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic Writing Prompts and writers block busters! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Do you ever listen to a song or musical score and write the scene you hear being played out in the notes and lyrics?
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Janellebelovedpig started the topic Little One's Journey… title pending in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
@esther-c @freedomwriter76 @acancello @solfyre @whoever-else-is-welcome-to-chime-in
This is the autobiographical allegory that I’ve started. Please, what are your thoughts? How do the characters grab you? (Also is a Google Doc easier for y’all to read it?
This is a story of Little One and the ways she walked on her journey from her home…[Read more]
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Janellebelovedpig posted a new activity comment 3 years, 1 month ago
Whoohoo! Thanks!
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