Jane Maree

@jane-maree Yeah. I’ll still try and work it as far from that style as possible. 🙂
@ethryndal Reading over it again, I see what you mean. This is what critiquing is for after all! 🙂 I shall work on it after I finish my homework. *scribbles down a reminder*

@dragon-snapper @that_writer-girl_99 @jane-maree *sniffs air* Is that pizza? Can I please have some? *gives puppy eyes*

Just got home from choir, only to have this conversation with my sister:

“Elizabeth, what are you gonna do now?”
“Write.”
To which she rolled her eyes and responded–with a sigh–“Of course.”

Anyways, I’ll be on until 10:00 or so.

@dragon-snapper @jane-maree @daeus @f5a8c3e92 @anyone else on

@jane-maree And you two, if you wanted to give us some inspirational pizza. *big smiles*

@jane-maree I know. I don’t want it to be like Harry Potter, but it’s… ugh!
@ethryndal Halle fell through a shadow, which teleported her to the castle. It’s meant to leave the reader confused because the Void doesn’t get explained until later…
@winter-rose Thanks! Sorry about any confusion. 😛

@kate-flournoy @daeus @jane-maree @winter-rose @that_writer_girl_99 Anyone else???

@emma-flournoy @kate-flournoy @daeus @winter-rose @that_writer_girl_99 @jane-maree Here is the FULL Prologue and Chapter 1. I didn’t actually provide the entire of Chapter 1 before. Tell me what you think.
Prologue
Halle’s heart raced. They’re coming. They’re coming for me. Her hair flew out behind her, blending with the browns and greens of the a…[Read more]

@daeus @emma-flournoy @winter-rose @kate-flournoy @jane-maree The entirety of the Prologue and Chapter 1 (I didn’t actually give you guys the whole of Chapter 1 to begin with):
Prologue
Halle’s heart raced. They’re coming. They’re coming for me. Her hair flew out behind her, blending with the browns and greens of the autumn forest. She leapt over…[Read more]

@daeus @winter-rose @kate-flournoy @jane-maree Could you guys tell me if you think it’s a good idea to make Halle part of Maya’s daydream? Please note that they will meet in person at the Academy in a few chapters. Here’s an update on the Prologue:
Halle’s heart raced. They’re coming. They’re coming for me. Her hair flew out behind her, blend…[Read more]

@Jane-maree Whoops, I forgot to respond to this! Thanks. I’m okay with outlining, I just don’t want to be bored out of my mind! 🙂

@emma-flournoy @graciegirl @ethryndal @winter-rose @that_writer_girl_99 @jane-maree Can you guys please critique? Thanks.

@emma-flournoy @graciegirl @ethryndal @winter-rose @that_write_girl_99 @jane-maree Can you guys please critique? Thanks.

@emma-flourney @graciegirl @ethryndal @winter-rose @that_write_girl_99 @jane-maree Can you guys please critique? Thanks.

@Jane-maree, @that_writer_girl_99 If anyone’s still around, I’ll be writing for a while. 🙂

@Jane-maree Thank you!
Another (maybe) quick question, How did you like the workbook? I’ve seen some reviews that said that the whole thing was outlining to death, so by the time they started writing, they were burned out.
I might have more questions, but I can’t think of anything else. I’ll probably end up doing it (maybe), I just wanted…[Read more]

Hey! Good to know 😉 @jane-maree

@winter-rose @jane-maree I’m out for the night. I wrote about 4 pages on paper to a short story that I’m writing. Good luck to those who travel onward!

@jane-maree That’s fine! You can just hand me the motivational pizza now. 😛
*blinks at computer* I feel so bad for your character…

Okay, I’m resurrecting this topic because I’ve been looking into it for next year. I know there are a few more people on the forum now who are/have taken the OYAN course, so I was wondering what opinions were… My concern is 1. Is it for beginning writers (as in never written a novel before) and not really aimed at people who write regularly?…[Read more]