Jane Maree

Oh, @jane-maree see above.  I didn’t see your post until I had posted.

@inkling-for-christ Try @jane-maree

She has more info on her website

Although I’m guessing she’s pretty busy as it is

And as you asked us to tag other Kapeefers….

@shannon  @seekjustice  @jane-maree  @inkling-for-christ  @jenwriter17  @daughteroftheking  @bethanysinkyroses  @princessfoo  @introvert_girl  @lady-iliara  @KAPEEFERS! (I’m so glad Daniel found that word X) )

@his-instrument  I love the storyline!

It does sound kind of dark. Maybe you could like spread out the dark a little bit…?

Anyway, sure! I’ll read it. 🙂

Someone who has more experience with plot line might be of more use, though…

@daeus  @aratrea  @sam-kowal  @seekjustice  @jane-maree  @princessfoo  @introvert_girl

(P.S. This is comple…[Read more]

@jenwriter17 Even if it feels like they’ve lost, I’d still give them some sort of victory, even if it seems really small. A great way to do this, is pretty much what @jane-maree said. If they can grow as a person in some way, I think it will help the ending feel more satisfying. In stories, I personally find internal victories more exciting than…[Read more]

@jenwriter17  Good question! I think you should leave the story with the characters feeling hopeful, even if it’s just a little hopeful, in the circumstances. You character should be motivated to set her wrongs right, and to improve everyone’s image of her, by saving the queen, or helping to save the queen, or doing her part in any way. If you…[Read more]

@waterlily  The dialogue is hilarious! I like it 🙂 Sorry I didn’t read it sooner.

Let’s see… It makes sense overall, but I think it would make more sense with some tweaks in grammar and “order.” For example, near the beginning, the “Hey” should be attached to the rest of Rufus’ dialogue, and then followed by the description. Or else the…[Read more]

Hey guys, sorry it took me a bit to get back. 😛 Thanks so much for all your feedback, it was so helpful.

I think I might have found a different option though… what do you guys think of Valiant?

@Daeus @Dekreel @That_Writer_Girl_99 @Audrey-Caylin @Jane-Maree @Shannon @Sam-Kowal @Winter-rose @Ethryndal @Emma-Flournoy

@jessi-rae Oooooh! 😀

@catwing @epicaddie2  @ingridrd  @seekjustice  @jane-maree   Can we please bring this topic back to life?! 😀

@emma-flournoy the name of the website came to me in an email from someone… I think it was from Brett Harris’s email list. And then I found it and read some of the articles, but I didn’t come back and realize there were KaPeefers here until… well, until I came back and realized there were KaPeefers here. And then I observed it was the…[Read more]

@anne-of-lothlorien THIS
Is totally, spectacularly wonderful 😀

Kingdom pen really is the bestistest place to ever grace the internet… I’m so glad I found it

@kate-flournoy @dekreel @alia @introvert_girl @supermonkey42 @daeus @aratrea @shannon @emily @dragon-snapper @seekjustice @ethryndal @emma-flournoy @jane-maree @epicaddie2 @all the other…[Read more]

Anyone else? @that_writer_girl_99  @seekjustice  @jane-maree

@daeus yes, that makes sense. Thanks!

@dragon-snapper I have yet to try index cards. I kinda get…scared of them. You know, after putting ALL my school notes on them I decided I don’t get along with them anymore. But it might just be the perfect thing for editing 😉

@ethryndal yes, comments are great! My only problem comes when I need to delete…[Read more]

@aislinn-mollisong @dekreel @jane-maree @ethryndal (to hijack more threads? *facepalm* @alia @catwing @anyone else
I’m plotting. *hehehe*