@jane-maree
Active 7 years, 11 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@emily thank you! I like your new profile photo too. Its really pretty 🙂
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Snapper replied to the topic Hi fellow KaPeeFers!!! in the forum Start HERE 9 years ago
@jess-penrose XD Yeah, that’s my thoughts. 😀 You might have noticed I have very strong opinions on these things. 😛
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J.A. Penrose replied to the topic Synopsis Help in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 9 years ago
@daeus I assume American’s call a blurb a synopsis? If so, this is great!
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J.A. Penrose replied to the topic Salutations, writers. I'm Xonos Darkgrate. in the forum Start HERE 9 years ago
@xonos-darkgrate Weeeeell, I am a Moriquendi… I suppose that’s a dark elf, but not Umea. Umumea.
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J.A. Penrose replied to the topic Hi fellow KaPeeFers!!! in the forum Start HERE 9 years ago
@dragon-snapper Cool. I don’t use MSG, I was more curious on whether you understood why it was written.
The original purpose of the MSG was not to be used as a translation. It was more just his contemplations and paraphrases of the Bible as he was reading it. So, cool to know your opinion. *thumbs up* -
Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Synopsis Help in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 9 years ago
@Dragon-Snapper *scowls* We are not taking over the kingdom.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Synopsis Help in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 9 years ago
@xonos-darkgrate as someone who has read and reread this story, I can assure you it’s anything but simple. In many ways it’s a lot like most classical literature— the premise it’s built on is very basic, almost simple, and yet when you read the story it’s nothing you ever would have guessed.
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Snapper replied to the topic The Author's Attic in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@rolena-hatfield I love your blog! Your Attic looks so nice!
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Snapper replied to the topic Synopsis Help in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 9 years ago
@kate-flournoy He forgot to tag me too. Can we take over the kingdom now? How bout now? Now?
@daeus Well…do you want my big thoughts or little thoughts? -
Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Synopsis Help in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 9 years ago
@Daeus *sniffs* You forgot to tag me.
But looks like I’m first to the party anyway, so here goes. XDFirst off, I really like it. The only suggestions I have are a few tweaks to the wording.
The first line, I think, would be better as simply ‘Trevor is in a mess. After traveling back in time, he and his sister are now…’ etc. It leaves out…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Synopsis Help in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 9 years ago
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Daeus started the topic Synopsis Help in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 9 years ago
Hi KeePers,
I’m trying to nail down the synopsis for my time travel novel Fools In The Darkness. If you have a moment, I’d really appreciate your help. Here’s what I have so far.
Trevor is in a mess after traveling back in time
Not only has he abandoned his friend to die, but he and his sister are now stuck in medieval England where a mad…[Read more]
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 9 years ago
@raevynstar Hello there! Glad you found us! If you have any questions about KP, the forums, or whatever, feel free to ask anyone!
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NC Stokes replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 9 years ago
@raevynstar I’m going to come right out and say it, I saw your profile pic and just about fell out of my chair. 😛 I LOVE TWENTY ONE PILOTS. *insert crazy fan moment here* Ok, now I’ve done that- hello!! Welcome to KP! How’d you hear about us?
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 9 years ago
@raevynstar Welcome to KP! Where do you live?
Yes, humans. Those are the biggest monsters possible for a good story!
That is a huge truth. Humans will ALWAYS be more interesting to read about than any kind of creature. Whether they’re good or bad. 😛
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@xonos-darkgrate @that_writer_girl_99 I’ll be praying for both of y’all.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@that_writer_girl_99 will continue. 😉
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NC Stokes replied to the topic Hello, Hello, Hello! in the forum Start HERE 9 years ago
*appears in a puff of smoke* Salutations, @kballen! *shakes your hand* Glad you could join us. So, what’s your favorite fictional animal?
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NC Stokes replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@Shannon No, I went to the DMV or whatever it’s called and took it there so a bunch of total strangers could see how nervous I was. 😉 This is terrible, but I’m kind of glad I’m not the only one who failed the first time. Not that I’m happy you failed, but, well, you get my point?
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NC Stokes replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@that_writer_girl_99 Sure! I will pray for you. 🙂
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