Jane Maree

Wait… @daeus, you have a show-don’t-tell course?! Where do I find it?! 😀

@Sam-Kowal Well, the Emperor wasn’t really established in the Originals, existing only as a vague reference in Ep. IV (“The Emperor has disbanded the galactic senate”) and a momentary hologram in Ep. V, yet he came back in Ep. VI as the Big Bad. With that in mind, the Knights going from vague references to an actual villainous force doesn’t seem…[Read more]

@Winter-Rose Yikes. 😂 Poor, poor Sam.

@inkling-for-christ  That’s not a bad idea! Go for it!

Questions: Who would I be nominating? Or would you be nominating me? And we’re nominating people to make stories that show/tell, right?

This sounds cool!

@inklings-for-christ I think that’s a fantastic idea! I probably won’t be able to chime in much, but otherwise, go for it. 😀

Trachea. That’s what my breath was caught halfway up.

Goodness. XD

@daeus thanks for tagging me! i’ll have to check this out, i’m thinking of looking into pinterest too.

@inkling-for-christ Well… ‘the baby squealed’ is telling what happened but it’s not emotional telling, which is what limits the story. Your second example is certainly more descriptive, but sometimes you’re not going to want that much detail or your story will be extremely long.

I would focus on the emotional telling, for example, you…[Read more]

I’m back. Seeing if I can do something with the DWN…

@aislinn-mollisong  @sam-kowal  @dragon-snapper @winter-rose @catwing

@that_writer_girl

He will forgo a lightsaber for the simplicity and tickling powers of a simple broom…

…when did we start calling him Broom Boy? What a sad nickname…

@that_writer_girl_99 They Rey/Kylo conflict and relationship was my favorite part, too. The moment in the throne room… my breath was caught halfway up my

@ethryndal That’s a really intriguing idea, about the Knights of Ren. It seems like either they would have to take over as main villains, or Episode 9 wouldn’t really have one, because Kylo…[Read more]

Heck yeah, Kylo and Rey! It doesn’t matter if you “ship” them or not, they were amazing. The fight between them and the Guards was my favorite part too.

…and yes. If something happens to poor Kylo Ren, I can assure you that I too will be severely enraged. @ethryndal

@That_writer_girl_99 Besides all of it? Hrrrrrm…. I don’t know. All of it. Gotta say, I loved the dimension between Kylo and Rey. Platonic or romantic, either way it was great. So much added complexity for him (*snorts* As if he didn’t need enough…) And the fight against the Praetorian Guards… OH. MY. GOODNESS. *dies* What was your favorite…[Read more]

@mariposa

*fumbles for words*

You know what, never mind. I’m not going to even try to explain how awesome it is. It’s too beautiful. 😀 Was it as tasty as it looks?

I think I’m signing off… the color is out *sighhhhh* *scratches table frustratedly*

@aislinn-mollisong  Sure! Good-bye! Say hi to Ariella for me 😉

@dekreel Ah, man! I have to get off. BUT I WILL KEEP YOU POSTED ON THE COLOR SITUATION! Gooooooodbyyyyyyyyeeeeee……

@aislinn-mollisong  Hooray! I have colors, but they’re a bit faded. I have no plot in the KPA whatsoever yet 😛 But it’s moving forward……..