Jane Maree

@dekreel

You’re not the first person to say that 😀 I definitely know that I have a problem with settings/worldbuilding (its like my writing kryptonite) and I’m planning on doing some serious work on that while my beta readers read it over and maybe give me some suggestions. That’s my plan for this August 🙂 Thank you for pointing it out again…[Read more]

@seekjustice  (Sorry it took so long to respond!!) I think you should describe the setting more. I mean, I get the idea that the story is set in futuristic Australia, but I feel like the descriptions aren’t… authentic enough. I don’t know exactly what you’d need to do to improve on it, but basically just make the setting and world more…[Read more]

@dekreel Apparently my reply didn’t post.

If it’s a longer suggestion, here would be fine! Otherwise, I don’t mind 😀

@seekjustice  I could really feel the emotion in it. You did well.

May I offer a suggestion? If so, should I do it here? In your doc? Somewhere else?

@rochellaine

Bye!

@dekreel Oooh, I’m glad you enjoyed it! That was a lot of fun to write that scene!

@rochellaine  Good night! Hope to see you tomorrow. Earlier in the night would be even better. XD

@seekjustice  I’m enjoying your book so far! I just finished reading over Justice’s riot in front of the town hall. It really made my heart pound.

@dekreel That’s good news 😀

@rochellaine  I’ve finished beta-reading and now I’m working on the comical poem prompt you gave me. 😉

@seekjustice  I know, you just didn’t know I was here. 😉 Going pretty well!

@rochellaine Yeah they do, but apparently it doesn’t work all that well 😛

@dekreel Sorry, I wasn’t ignoring you 😀 How’s things? I’ve been going through your comments!

@rochellaine  @seekjustice  Heyyyy, I’m still here! 😉

@rochellaine

We used to live with another family a bit further out than that, but everyone knew where they lived so we were right 😛 What’s annoying about where we live now though is that we technically live at an address which is different to our postal address, which makes it hard when people try to deliver stuff to us. (What happens is that we…[Read more]

@rochellaine

Okay then 😛

About half an hour from town 😀

@rochellaine

Cool….what’s it about?

Depends. Today we had to drop my mum’s car off to get serviced and then went to some op shops. We usually have to do grocery shopping and on Fridays I do dancing and youth group.

@rochellaine

All right. I’ll have a look at it in a minute! What are you working on at the moment?

@rochellaine

I’m here now! 😀 What’s the song?

@amy-l-klob  I found a website with boys names in the 1700s that might help out a little! My favorite names on the list for your character are Abe, Amos, Asa, Eli, Ike, Jed, Oscar, Reuben, Stanley,  and Thaddeus. Hope that helps! 🙂

@catwing  They do sound cute!

Don’t you live on a farm? I forgot. If so what kinds of animals do you have?

@catwing  What kind of goats do you have? (I know nothing whatsoever about goat breeds or anything like that. Lecture me if you wish. 😛 )

@catwing  You sound busy! I wish my writer life was that lively. 😛

Haha, goats, eh? What’s it like having goats?

@catwing  CHESHIRE CATWINGIE! 😉

Hello! How are you doing?