Jane Maree

@inkling-for-christ Depending on the style of editing you’re looking for, I don’t actually have anyone scheduled in at the moment so I’m not too busy. I do charge (a low cost) for a professional edit though -you can check out my details HERE– but I try keep it affordable.

If it’s an incomplete manuscript, I would be happy to work through it and…[Read more]

@Winter-Rose ooh I love it. The others have said my thoughts basically, but I would echo that yes, my first impression was that it was a little long, so if you could cut down some of it, it might be better.

@jenwriter17 Sad endings are tricky to write, but also a ton of fun. Your character DOESN’T have to succeed in the story goal (if they do, there’s less sadness, in a way), but they SHOULD grow themeatically. If they fail in the goal, but grow and learn and have a great character arc, that will satisfy readers just as much.

@Waterlily very nice! There’s some gramatical/punctuation mistakes, but nothing too important right now. Very good job! 😀

@Kate-Flournoy aahh yes Valiant sounds wonderful. Definitely a title that’d make me pick up the book to look at the back cover.

@sam-kowal Merry Christmas to you also. You’re awesome too. 😛

@Audrey-Caylin What I tend to do, is write out a list of the problems and then write out ways that I’m going to fix those problems. Sometimes I do that on paper, or a doc, or whatever. But I do it with a dot-point list. Kind of like…

• Fred’s character arc is terrible
• Big plot hole in chapter six onward

And so on. Then there’s the list of…[Read more]

@sleepwalkingmk You’re very welcome! 😀

@mariposa Oh my word I’m giggling so hard. XD This is THE BESTISTEST. xP

@sleepwalkingmk Nice! I’ve put in a couple of comments on the actual doc for you. 🙂

@Seekjustice alrighty. Have a good afternoon/evening! *doffs imaginary hat*

@Seekjustice you can do it!! 😉

@Seekjustice indeed. 😛

Editing is going fairly well. I keep getting sidetracked (thanks very much, oh my tiny little attention span *rolls eyes*) but it’s been fun.

@SeekJustice yayy, howdy! *waves* I’ll be here for a while yet. 😀 (Though I may duck off to grab foods at some point)

@Daughteroftheking @Alia fare well! See you both in the future. <3

@Alia I’m working on rewriting a scene from my novella (A Sprig of Green) and including some new character aspects.

@DaughteroftheKing heyyyy. Welcome!! 🙂