Jane Maree

@dragon-snapper *waves* Welcome!!

@ethryndal Aw. 🙁 *sends a gift of pizza after you*

Aw. 🙁 *sends a gift of pizza after you*

@winter-rose Yay! *teleports in a flash of blue to go edit more*

@winter-rose if you’re still going, I’m editing my WIP currently. 😀

Oh yes yes this is a good idea. My spring writing goals are…

– Plot out the finale of my trilogy (I need to do that this month)
– Write book three in April/Camp NaNoWriMo
– Finish editing (2nd draft) book #1 and send it to one or two Alpha readers
– Run away screaming in panic as they read my precious mess of nonsense

Reading:

– Creating…[Read more]

@Dragon-snapper alrighty. I’m writing a trilogy (not finished the last book yet) that’s Dystopian/Sci-Fi so I’d like to think I know what I’m doing. But actually I don’t have a clue. 😀

In my trilogy I have a lot of Holograms, Hovering machines and some plasma/laser guns/bullets. For things like that it’s best to have a normal modern thing -for…[Read more]

@aratrea thank you again for the help. 🙂 I’ll definitely be playing around with different ideas, and I do have two characters that should be able to fill the Saruman/Gollum position with a bit of tweaking.

@overcomer no problem! I hope it’s helpful. 🙂

@overcomer Alrighty I managed to grab enough time to read and give it an edit over. I did it in a google doc, so hopefully it works. I’ll link to it, and you should be able to see what I’ve suggested and accept/reject said edit suggestions.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/16jNPsx_TyzVFKnVbbBRcaITZK3x85NNkgf8kNLyWrZc/edit?usp=sharing

*hopes it works*

@winter-rose okie dokie! (Have fun eating dinner 🙂 ) I got a little plotting done and also some critiquing work.

@winter-rose sshhhhhh don’t tell. xD I’m sending out messenger pigeons to my minion armies to mount their attack while I hide in my tower and practice my evil overlord laughs.

@aratrea oh thank you!! That will definitely be useful. 🙂

I thought that maybe I could get the villain out of his office and actually go to the ‘front lines’ so he can better command his agents (naturally under constant bodyguard supervision so there’s no way he could get killed). And then I can add a more personal attack from him, and a more…[Read more]

@winter-rose I’ll be plotting! 🙂

@winter-rose yay! Good for you! 😀 Thanks for writing with me.

@jenali oh yesss. I read that book last year and liked it quite a lot. It had a really interesting concept.

@aratrea thank you!! 🙂
I’m sort of struggling with my beginning. It feels a bit up-down and not entirely connected to the plot. After the inciting incident there’s seven chapters before the first plot point and I’m not sure how to keep the plot moving during that time not just pointless action scenes.
And making my villain not an evil-overlord…[Read more]

@winter-rose any time. 🙂 I’m very happy to try help out if I can.

@Winter-rose oh nice. 🙂
Some from my names list: Evans, Hier, Morgan, Enwood, Brys.

@Dragon-snapper okay thanks for writing!!

@winter-rose hmmm what’s the genre?