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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Book Description Opinions in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years, 2 months ago
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Amnesia? in the forum Sci-Fi 9 years, 2 months ago
@Northerner ha! 😀 It may or may not have crossed my mind…
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Book Description Opinions in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years, 2 months ago
@daeus I like the sentence change. I do like @graciegirl‘s version too… So, yes. Not much help. Just general agreement…
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Book Description Opinions in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years, 2 months ago
@Daeus I think lingering works. Better than anything I could come up with.
Aaand… honestly I’m not sure. It’s a toss-up. Both of those work in different ways… So helpful, I know. 😛
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Amnesia? in the forum Sci-Fi 9 years, 2 months ago
Ladies and gentlemen, this is how we integrate theme and premise. Let’s have a round of applause.
*deafening applause*@Rachelle I love it! Do it. Cliches aren’t cliches if they’re part of the theme and by extension necessary to the story.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Calling all KeePers— the Realm of Pen needs you! in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 2 months ago
Thanks so much guys @Hope @Audrey-Caylin @Kayla-Joy!
@R-J-Wordsmith sure thing. How about… pencils? *eyes twinkle*
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Book Description Opinions in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years, 2 months ago
@Daeus I like it! As Kate says… you were born to sell things. Writing about my book is one of my least favorite things. Can’t just writing the thing be enough? As for bittersweet, I looked it up int a thesaurus and it gave me poignant, nostalgic, affecting, touching, and sentimental. Not sure if any of those fit, but…
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Quote That in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 2 months ago
@his-instrument The Princess Bride! 😀 Fezzic to Westley.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Let's talk about Jean Valjean. in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 2 months ago
Ha! Aaaand she already posted. 😀 I leave you in the hands of a dedicated fan, @His-Instrument. 😉
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Let's talk about Jean Valjean. in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 2 months ago
@His-Instrument Oh look! A Les Mis RANT THREAD! :’D
@EMMA-FLOURNOY GET OVER HERE NOW.
*ahem* Love this topic. I could probably write a book about everything Les Mis did amazingly… you covered a lot of it. I’d also like to point out what a great job Hugo did of recycling characters— bringing them in again in all the most unexpected places…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Book Description Opinions in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years, 2 months ago
@Daeus *gags* No THANK YOU.
Hm… good point. I’m drawing a blank though. I shall return if something comes to me.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Book Description Opinions in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years, 2 months ago
@Daeus you were born to sell things, weren’t you?
I love it. I think it’s great. Can’t find anything right off the top of my head that needs fixing.
And hey, it’s not flattery if it’s true, now is it?As for descriptions… solemn?
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Call for beta readers in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years, 2 months ago
@Northerner I would love to, especially as this is one of my absolute favorite time-periods, but I’m afraid my schedule will not allow for any consistent sort of time-table, at least not currently. Keep me on your list of for the future though— I really want to read this.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Rachelle's Digital Art in the forum Art 9 years, 2 months ago
@Rachelle WOW. Her dress. How did you make it look like textured fabric??? Textures are the one thing I always struggled with. Good job. That’s… wow. Good job. 😀
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Rachelle's Digital Art in the forum Art 9 years, 2 months ago
@Rachelle WOW. Her dress. How did you make it look like textured fabric??? Textures are the one thing I always struggled with. Good job. That’s… wow. Good job. 😀
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Punctuation Question in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 2 months ago
*is suddenly smitten with doubt in everything she’s ever learned as she realizes she doesn’t know*
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic ARCHIVED – Homework for Video 10: Theme & Scene Structure in the forum Writing Assignments 9 years, 2 months ago
@Daeus *chokes on snack* Aaaaaand this is why I don’t normally pick favorites. XD
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Calling all KeePers— the Realm of Pen needs you! in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 2 months ago
“Fire is set to devastate the world and you are offering me chocolate?”
“It tastes good, my dear. Relax, would you? It’s only the earth.” -
Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Rachelle's Digital Art in the forum Art 9 years, 2 months ago
@Rachelle those are GORGEOUS and that little mini story is too adorable for words. *hugs herself to keep all the warm fuzzies inside* More pleeeeeeease… Pretty please?
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