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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #20 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
@seekjustice Haha, I have to admit that American food is known for being all fried, salted, and sugared far beyond the tastes of normalcy, and with reason. We make fun of it ourselves, though. 😉 A lot of people don’t eat fast food much, but it is a real thing.
Wait…there are people who don’t eat pb&j??? Are you serious? Wow. Have you ever…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #20 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
@seekjustice 😛
The question is…what are American culinary tastes? We have such a mixture here, since we’re a melting pot of all nations. 😉
What particular tastes do they think the general population has that are worth maligning?
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic It's a Big World Out There… in the forum Poetry Critiques 7 years, 6 months ago
@rochellaine Thanks! Yes, I would actually like to know what verses you said didn’t flow very smoothly.
I’ve always liked your poems. 😉
@ariel-ashira Thank you! 😀
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Rochellaine replied to the topic It's a Big World Out There… in the forum Poetry Critiques 7 years, 6 months ago
@ariel-ashira Thanks, I’m glad you like my poems. 🙂 I didn’t mean my poems are bad. I meant that they don’t have themes or deep meanings. They are meant simply to entertain – to make people laugh – to be light, fluffy, airy creatures which don’t make you think about the meaning of life.
And while a lot of people, including myself, love to r…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #20 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
@seekjustice What type of tartan do you wear? (The different ones mean different things, right?)
Haha, I’m an amazing procrastinator too! 😀
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #20 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
@seekjustice I got notified this morning of a random post from you about sewing lacy petticoats…
I think you meant to tag @valtmy 😉 I was very confused for a bit! Actually I got on KP expecting to see a hilarious picture of a quite ruined lace petticoat sort of like this:

I hope you’ve been able to figure out how to complete the project…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic It's a Big World Out There… in the forum Poetry Critiques 7 years, 6 months ago
@jenwriter17 Oh, and every time I read your title I start singing “It’s a Big, Wide, Wonderful World.” 😛
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Rochellaine replied to the topic It's a Big World Out There… in the forum Poetry Critiques 7 years, 6 months ago
@jenwriter17 I like it!
Your poem has a much better chance of getting accepted by SE than any of mine do, because yours has meaning, while all mine are silly, empty comic poems. 😛 So congratulations on that! 😀
I don’t know much (anything 😉 ) about free verse, so I can’t give you a lot of suggestions. There are a couple of lines that don’t q…[Read more]
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #20 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
@seekjustice @catwing @seekjustice
I have to leave now, but I will be on this weekend for sure. Bye!
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #20 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
@valtmy 😀
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #20 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
@catwing Hi. 😀 You can join us on our character questioning if you’d like. 😉
Rin hasn’t really given it any thought, Vega would like to someday, Nym hasn’t thought much about it either, Taro wouldn’t even entertain the thought, and Uma…well, she’s a mystery…I’ll have to think on that one.
What fantasy-type pet would your…[Read more]
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic It's a Big World Out There… in the forum Poetry Critiques 7 years, 6 months ago
@seekjustice 😀
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #20 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
haha, they actually don’t! 😀 I almost never come up with middle names, unless it’s needed in the story. *suddenly starts looking up futuristic names*
If your characters had a job in our world, what would it be?
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic It's a Big World Out There… in the forum Poetry Critiques 7 years, 6 months ago
Okaaaaay…that’s odd…
trying again…
It’s a Big World Out There…
It’s a big world out there…
Very big
So many people
So many possibilities
So many ways to fail
How can one person
Make a difference
Make changes
Change lives
In this big world
So many people.
People that don’t agree
Don’t understand
What we’re doing…[Read more]
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #20 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
@seekjustice Oh, they’re two new characters I added to my dystopian (I don’t think I’ve told anyone about them yet). I’ll be doing a blog post about it at the end of October where I tell a bit more about them. 🙂
Rin would rather visit a snowy region, since she’s used to the chilly weather of Chicago. For Taro, probably the dessert, cuz it’s…[Read more]
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Jenna Terese started the topic It's a Big World Out There… in the forum Poetry Critiques 7 years, 6 months ago
Recently I’ve had a fascination with freestyle poems, because they don’t follow any specific pattern or form. I just recently wrote one, one that I was hoping to submit to some website possibly (maybe even SE).
The thing is, I don’t know much about writing poetry, and I would love it if anyone had any suggestions they wanted to give. 🙂

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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #20 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
Who in their family is your character closest to?
Rin was closest with her parents, but since they disappeared, she’s probably closest to her best friends Vega and Nym, who are like family to her.
Your question: Would your character rather eat a bowl of melted ice cream or eat a frozen cheeseburger? (yes, randomness…I’m tired 😛 )
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #20 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
@valtmy Okay, I hope you can! 😀
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #20 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
@seekjustice hmm, that’s odd. I’ll keep praying for him, and that the doctors can figure things out soon.
Sure! (we could even just do ‘would you rather’ questions for the characters???)…
What new hobby would your character be most likely to try?
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #20 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
I just had an idea…what if we threw random questions back and forth about our current WIP’s main character(s), since we can’t word war at the moment? 🙂
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