introvert_girl

@catwing

It’s not that I do not like fantasy (though I admit to never taking a fancy to high fantasy and magic that do not have adequate explanations and justifications) but I found it hard to write. For my pitiful attempt a fantasy, I established a magic system and I even had a plot that would make use and exemplify the themes of the system very…[Read more]

@catwing

Oh a science fiction-fantasy? Wow I don’t think I heard of anything like that. I tried writing a fantasy myself once and it… didn’t go so well. The idea’s tucked into the backroom of my mind for now. 😛

Yep I can relate with not knowing how my story is supposed to go. I know the beginning and the end but I just want God to tell me…[Read more]

@catwing

Hi. Oh and I don’t think I ever asked you this but what is your WIP about? 😛

@valtmy Okay, and I could disappear any minute.  But here are a couple of questions:

1. You found out Yishay very quickly.  Would it be more interesting if it were not so obvious, or is it fine as it is?  If I had him just go to his house and wait for Bathshua would that make it harder to figure out?  But that seems quite out of character for an…[Read more]

@rochellaine

I’ll be here for a bit then I’ll need to go off for bible study.

@seekjustice @valtmy Are either of you around?  I’m here for only a little bit, but I have a couple of questions.

@seekjustice I sent you an invitation to the document. 😀

I won’t be here now for a while, though I might pop in and out.  But I’ll be on later tonight.

Oh, I hope you feel better soon!! 🙁  Rest is good, though. 😉

@rochellaine

You can send me an invite.

@jenwriter17 I have a few remedies I am using.  Hopefully it’ll go away soon. 😉

Sorry you had to go, but I guess I wasn’t really here anyway. 😛  I’ll probably be on later tonight.

@jenwriter17 I’m doing housework right now, and that’s why my replies are sometimes far between. 😉

Sorry to hear about the cough, but glad it’s only temporary. 😀

My poison ivy is not getting any better, and I still can barely use my left hand. 🙁 (especially bad since I’m left-handed. 😛 ) But I learned something cool because of it.  I took a…[Read more]

@jenwriter17 Oh, too bad.  Bye!

@seekjustice @valtmy @catwing @dekreel Is anyone else around?

@jenwriter17 I’m still here, in and out. 😉

That’s strange.  Would you like me to try re-inviting you and see if that works?

I’d much rather have comments on the document so I don’t lose them in the mires of the forums, 😛 but if it ends up you can’t comment at all I’d love to hear your thoughts anyway, so in that case commenting here would be fine.

@jenwriter17 I think I sent it to you.  Hope you get it all right. 😉

I’m here, sort of.  I’ll be off and on for a bit.  How’s it going?

You know you’re a writer when you find yourself fixing the grammar on some lyric slides in ProPresenter.

“There’s… no… punctuation…. Must… add…punctuation!!!!”

@seekjustice @jenwriter17 @valtmy @catwing Hey people!  The first section of Daughter of Judas is ready for comments!!  If anyone wants to read it, let me know and I’ll send you an invite to the document. 😀

Warning: I do not write anywhere near as fast as SeekJustice or a lot of the people on here, so the progress is slow.  The part you’ll be re…[Read more]

@rochellaine

Oh right. I remember you giving me feedback about how it did not really feel like a parody.

So my story is actually not really a parody but a political/historical romance with a comedic bent? I’m not very sure anymore. I’m fine if it does not end up really being a parody anyway. I simply started writing this story with the mind to…[Read more]

@valtmy Thanks! I’ll have a look in a bit.

Hm, I thought I gave you some comments here on the forums.  Did I not?  I guess you still want more detailed comments in the document?  Okay, I’ll be on a long car ride today, so I should be able to reread it and actually comment this time.

Thanks for reminding me.  I often forget about something unl…[Read more]

Hey guys sorry for vanishing again!

@catwing Yes, my noon is your midnight 😛

@rochellaine Yes I’ve read the doc and left some comments. Take it as a not-so-subtle reminder that I’m still waiting for your comments on my doc. 😭

@seekjustice I forgot to ask but am I going to be one of your beta readers for your second draft of SFI?

@seekjustice That’s why I think the 50s or 60s would be the best times to travel back and live in.  They’re far enough forward that we’d have sufficient enough technology so the culture shock wouldn;t be too great, and just at the right crossing point where women were free to do most things, but were still expected to act like ladies and the…[Read more]

@seekjustice Sounds great!  I’ll have to see if I can get the chance to read it.

I haven’t read any of Amy Carmichael’s books in a while, but I absolutely loved Mimosa!

Well, I think if I read it now I might have a different impression than I had when I was younger. 😉

Haha! 😀  I?  Old fashioned?  Why on earth would you say that? 😛 But yea…[Read more]