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@rochellaine

Haha does that mean I have a distinctive writing style? Or that my stories are too similar in inspiration and tone?

I think QOD and ROF will end being similar in tone but the stories will be very different. QOD features a female MC who loves romance and whose story is more of one of drama and personal growth. ROF will feature a male…[Read more]

@rochellaine  Hopefully inspiration will kick in soon…

Can you remind me one more time about all the positions on the Kingdom now? I know SeekJustice is the queen… Or something.

@dekreel Don’t worry about it.  Response time isn’t important. 😉

Another KPA would be so much fun!!

@rochellaine  (Sorry it took so long to respond. I’m a little distracted.)

Fair enough…

Do you think I should write another KPA? A shorter one? XD

@valtmy Haha, apparently I’m having the same trouble with Daughter of Judas. 😛  Trying to keep the customs and culture of the times, while making it not confusing and freaky to a modern audience is certainly difficult.

Well, of course. 😛  And no, you haven’t been portraying it as a positive thing, but you have been portraying it as sort of t…[Read more]

@rochellaine

Oh. My other question had to do with the “When she did” line which you apparently have no idea how to rephrase too. 😛

For my MC’s age… I don’t think I am going to change it. But I think I would insert a line somewhere saying that the actual marriage is not going to take place until years later (sigh, catering to the delicate…[Read more]

@valtmy That’s what happened to my western, unfortunately. 🙁  I definitely haven’t quit it, but I had to take a break because I wasn’t getting anywhere with it.

Ok, I went back and replied to your age question.  I didn’t see what other questions you had asked, though.  What were they?

@seekjustice Are you back from church yet?  What do you thi…[Read more]

@valtmy  I’m glad your writing is going well!! 😀 😀

(I’m not trying to imply that I’m glad you keep disappearing, by the way… XD)

@rochellaine  I’m pretty sure I’m on the second draft. Why?

Good! I’m glad! So now I know I DON’T want poison ivy. XD

A jackalope is like a giant rabbit with antlers. Look up pictures. 😉

@rochellaine

Haha. I have phases where I fall in love and out of love with my own projects. I’ve been rereading what I’ve written so far for my WIP to encourage myself to push forward. 😛

Oh by the way, there are some questions I asked you in response to your comments in my doc. Some of them are still bothering me especially the one with regard…[Read more]

@valtmy Thank you so much!  That’s very helpful. 😀

Have you convinced yourself to start working on your own project yet? 😛  You said you were having trouble with that.

@dekreel Aw, Kai. 😀  Hey, are you reading the first draft or the second draft?  (This is a VERY important question.)  😛  You’ll find out who he is soon enough.  He’s not my…[Read more]

@catwing  I like blog posts with art in them (like your comic) and life posts in general. Like the kind of stuff Ethryndal does (if you’ve ever read her blog).

@rochellaine  Hey hey! That’s fine. 😉 I’m at the part where Chessy is talking to Kai.

I’m very curious about this “boy…” *smirks* How’s your poison ivy doing, by the way? Any better?

Random-ish question: Would you disbelief a jackalope?

@catwing  Hullo! Good to see ya! How are you doing?

@catwing I wonder. 😛  Since it was apparently “obvious” at the time the Bible was written, it must have been later that the change took place.  The Pharisees and Sadducees did make up some pretty ridiculous rules, didn’t they?

Well, since that’s in the Bible, I know that. 😉  For holidays, my dad’s relatives start the holiday at sundown, but si…[Read more]

@rochellaine

OK I’ve put in my suggestions in the doc.

@dekreel Hey-hello-how-do-you-do-how-nice-to-see-you!  😛  Sorry for falling asleep on you last night. 😉  But I’m awake now!  It’s only 10:20.

@seekjustice Don’t worry, Dekreel will soon know who that “boy” is. 😛

What part are you on now, Dekreel?

@valtmy  @catwing  @rochellaine  @seekjustice  @whoever

Oy! I’m beta-reading again!

@catwing Continuing our earlier conversation, I didn’t realize that was the kind of prayer shawls you were talking about. 😛  I thought you were talking about men’s prayer shawls, like in Fiddler on the Roof.  So do you mean that the women wore different prayer shawls from their everyday head coverings, (or veils, as I called it in my story,) w…[Read more]

@rochellaine

I didn’t say you didn’t give enough info. I understood the “going to be late” thing was something that the reader doesn’t need to know now. It’s just jarring that this guy doesn’t know who Bathshua is but this other guy with him somehow does so I think an explanation is needed for that.

Sure I’ll be happy to take a look at your…[Read more]

@valtmy Thanks, I’ll take a look. 🙂

Well, I have one more thing.  You asked about what was going on with the guys, and said I didn’t give enough info.  I had written a parallel scene from the guys’ perspective, but just set it aside because I really, really want to have only Bathshua’s POV in this.  However, if you like you could take a look at…[Read more]