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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@seekjustice Hello? I just remembered that it’s Sunday for you, but I was thinking of talking about theology anyway, inspired by your latest blog post… 😉
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
I’ve never cut my hair much above my waist. But I can imagine how horrified I’d be if I somehow had to get it cut above my ears, like Chessy! I think the very shortest I could ever stand would have to be several inches below my shoulders, but I much prefer it long.
@seekjustice 😛 Yeah, on the first video Jane Maree posted, I…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@jenwriter17 So you already got through the Jonas visit scene! 😀
Oh yes, the haircut part is horrible. I mean, if they could have just cut it below her ears! But no, she got this horrible, scary haircut, and all her beautiful long hair is gone. 🙁
@seekjustice Wait till you come to America, then you can write an experience-inspired book ab…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@seekjustice Yup! I was tired. Fell asleep a little after twelve. 😉
@jenwriter17 What part of Stars are you at now?
You’ve watched the whole series several times?!! There are fourteen seasons! I’ve only seen a few episodes. 😛
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@jenwriter17 I’m doing great! How about you?
What are you working on now?
I’m going to watch Bonanza with my family later tonight, so I’m excited about that. Have you ever seen it? You do like old tv shows, right?
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@jenwriter17 You still around?
@seekjustice @valtmy @alia I’m studying/writing/getting distracted 😀
@dekreel I miss you again! Where have you disappeared to? 😉
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Bits & Pieces: A critique group. in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years ago
@kaymart Hey! That sounds very interesting. I can’t promise I’ll be able to critique all your bits and pieces, but I can give you my comments on this one. 🙂
So, that bit of writing is very intriguing. I like the simple symbolism of the bending grass. One thing I think should probably be reworded is the part where Marcus says why he can’t lea…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@alia Ah, I see. 🙂
Well, I would guess that’s probably because I’m only nineteen, so most people would assume I was in my first or second year. I started college a bit younger than the average age, I think. 😉
Part of what I like so much about Daughter of Judas is that my “antagonists” are the Christians, so that’s a big twist on the average…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@alia That sounds interesting, though not something I’d want to do. I can’t stand anything that has to do with medical stuff. 😛 I hope it goes well for you.
No, I’m actually halfway through my third year. I’ll graduate in December of 2019.
Ah, I’ve even forgotten or skipped scenes I wrote for specific spots in my books. 😉 I guess it’s bec…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@alia I’m doing pretty well, but am extremely tired. However, I have quite a bit of studying to do, so I’ll be attempting to keep awake for a while and review some legal definitions… 😉
Oh, fun! I write a lot of little scenes, and often many of them don’t end up in the finished book, 😛 so it’s cool that you’re able to actually put that in.
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@alia Hey, how are you doing?
What are you working on?
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@catwing 😀 Curly black hair is basically all you need to know. He’s pretty easy to spot. 😉
@seekjustice You here yet?
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
@valtmy That’s the same thing that happened with my western and DoJ. I currently have been actually writing on DoJ and making notes for my western, but that could change at any moment. 😀
@seekjustice Bye! I’m leaving now too.
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valtmy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
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valtmy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
I love brainstorming. I have lots of ideas for my stories but the problem comes with linking them together into a tight, cohesive plot that somewhat makes sense 😛
Lately I’ve been getting a lot of inspiration for my other story, Rules of Fate, as opposed to my WIP, QOD. So I am thinking of looking through and uploading the first…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
@seekjustice Ah, I don’t know. Sometimes it’s fun to criticize. I mean, if we know better than the writers, we must know a lot, right? And isn’t it fun to know a lot? Or at least, to feel like you know a lot on one particular subject?
I was just on a quiz website the other day and passed the grammar, history, and literature tests with fly…[Read more]
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valtmy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
Haha, yes, where did that come from? That is not the direction my story is taking at all. 😛
By the way, if you want to read the second part of QOD, the link is available on the thread so you can request for access. No one’s read it yet though. (Not trying to pressurize you to read it or anything since I’m still struggling through…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
@valtmy Good question. Maybe the house is backed up to a hedge, and since the stairs are easily seen by anyone, he wants to go by the hedge so no one can see him talking to her? They could be in the terribly cliche situation where her parents hate the guy, or at least he thinks they do, or he could be in hiding for some terrible crime against t…[Read more]
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valtmy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
Haha. Thanks I’ll think about it. My MC is not in a situation to talk about romantic stuff with a guy and she won’t be for a very long time. But that might work for another character in one of the subplots…?
Nevertheless, the porch is not a balcony so why can’t the guy just climb the stairs and talk to the girl on the porch like a…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
@valtmy Haha! Since window scenes specifically aren’t a cliche, why don’t you do a balcony scene instead? As popularized by Romeo and Juliet, balcony scenes are an iconic sight in romantic fiction.
I looked up traditional Korean architecture and it looks like there are a lot of houses on stilts with railed porches. If the girl goes out on th…[Read more]
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