@ingridrd
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@nicolerivers03 Just taggin’ you again in case you didn’t see Kale yet! 😉
A dreamer who believes in the impossible...and dragons. (INFJ-T)
@dekreel Awww…thanks! 🙂
A dreamer who believes in the impossible...and dragons. (INFJ-T)
Here’s some characters I wanted to share with you guys…my sister and I started their story a while back and I brought out the notebook recently. Hence the sketches! 🙂
They are four siblings:
A dreamer who believes in the impossible...and dragons. (INFJ-T)
@nicolerivers03 Hey! I’ll draw her—she sounds like a ton of fun! I’ll get her done within the next few days. 🙂
A dreamer who believes in the impossible...and dragons. (INFJ-T)
@leumeister 😍😍😍
A dreamer who believes in the impossible...and dragons. (INFJ-T)
Well, I found some time this morning. Here they are! I wasn’t sure what age Echo is sooo she might look on the young side (and I pictured her kind of shabby but I don’t know if that’s what you wanted). Anyway, hopefully they’re something close to what you were looking for! 🙂
A dreamer who believes in the impossible...and dragons. (INFJ-T)
@leumeister I would like to try one/both of your characters…but I have hardly any time to spare at the moment, as I am helping prepare for my sister’s graduation party this Saturday. They do sound like awesome characters though and it may be next week before I get to them. 🙂
A dreamer who believes in the impossible...and dragons. (INFJ-T)
@daughteroftheking Oh don’t worry about it! Thanks again. 😉
A dreamer who believes in the impossible...and dragons. (INFJ-T)
@kaya-young Thank so much for reading and for the comments!!! 🙂
A dreamer who believes in the impossible...and dragons. (INFJ-T)
@jenwriter17 Thank you! And thanks again ever so much for reading. 🙂
A dreamer who believes in the impossible...and dragons. (INFJ-T)
@jenwriter17 About the title, I’m actually thinking @skredder ‘s idea of Underneath fits it perfectly! 🙂
A dreamer who believes in the impossible...and dragons. (INFJ-T)
Okay, I’m gonna kind of sort of *completely* copy you and ask you some questions about my story, if you don’t mind (since you’re the only one who has finished it so far)!
1. Who was your favorite character and why?
2. Were there any scenes that felt unnecessary or just like a complete info-dump?
3. Are the characters (especially Jaclyn) relatable enough and real enough?
4. Were there any major plot points that just didn’t make sense?
5. Was the ending satisfying and would you read the next book?
@kaya-young @daughteroftheking @anyone-else-who-was-reading Feel free to answer these once you’ve finished! 😉A dreamer who believes in the impossible...and dragons. (INFJ-T)
@jenwriter17 OH! I actually went to England and France while we were in Europe, and of the two, I liked England better. I live in Ohio so we flew to D.C. and then took a 7 hour flight to London.
We stayed in a London flat for a few days to sight-see and also to visit my “sister” (who isn’t biological but is an orphan who we hosted a while back and whom we have flown over to the U.S. a number of times; she is around 23 now, I think). Anyway, we saw the Tower Bridge (which is super pretty!) and the London Bridge (which is pretty much a plain old bridge lol). I would encourage you to visit the Tower of London…that was really interesting. Of course, we saw Big Ben and walked past Buckingham. We also went through Windsor Castle, Westminster Abbey, and Shakespeare’s Globe theater. Also, when you guys go, I would suggest going up the Thames on a boat tour. That was amazing!
Okay, after London we went to the countryside of England, a place called the Cotswolds, Stow-on-the-Wold. We stayed in a BEAUTIFUL stone townhouse called Bag End (so naturally we loved it because of the LOTR reference…XD). This little town was so restful and had some great places for awesome walks. Also, I just love all the little pubs you find everywhere in England…they are so charming! And I can’t forget how awesome it was that I actually picked up a bit of a British accent while there. *wiggles eyebrows* (Sorry, I have a weird obsession with British accents…).
If you guys do end up going elsewhere in Europe, the French countryside is also breathtaking. We stayed in the Loire Valley at a bed-and-breakfast and it was just…I can’t even express how much I loved it. 🙂
Hmm…we did not watch any soccer, although some little Welsh boys invited my brother to play “football” with them at a Sunday Roast we went to in London. 😉
Hope this helps some! If you have any other questions, feel free to ask!
A dreamer who believes in the impossible...and dragons. (INFJ-T)
1. My favorite character is Jax. *hugs him* He is very headstrong and brave, while still a kind gentleman.
2. My favorite scene would have to be the one near the end when Uma and Rin say they’ll be friends forever…it’s so sweet and you really triggered a lot of emotion. 🙂
3. Hmmm…no specific scenes. Some sentences here and there, but those will be worked with on the second draft, I know.
4. YES. Every decision Rin made was so like her, if you know what I mean. And the rest of them too.
5. Trust/faith was the underlying theme I observed. Rin is beginning to trust in God’s plan for her, even though she may not know what that is yet. She also had to learn to trust Jax and Uma as friends. *shrugs* That’s what I got, anyway. 😉
6. The ending was great! It was satisfying, but still left me begging for more.
7. Honestly, you did such an awesome job with world-building. Just by creating robots, finger-print scanners, and even different-sounding names you managed to make me feel like I was watching the action in another time. Great work!
A dreamer who believes in the impossible...and dragons. (INFJ-T)
