hybridlore

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Okay, sorry for taking so long to get back to this. I have a google form here to figure out how to best organize this. Please fill this out, even if you are just planning on giving feedback.           …[Read more]

@hybridlore

Wait really!!!!

*jumps around cheering*

Yahoo!!!!

@hybridlore    @keilah-h

Thank you, thank you, thank you very much. *twirls hat dramatically because for some reason that is the mental image I have* Feedback like this is always super helpful.

In answer to Hybrid’s question, this book is about the length of the first one with the middle two being the longest. I just submitted really bi…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed      @hybridlore     @koshka     @keilah-h       @elishavet-pidyon       @linus-smallprint

QUESTIONS!

Characters:

~Which character(s) did you find the most compelling/relatable/believable and why?

~ Were there any character that need to be more engaging? If so, how would be some good ways for me to do tha…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Oh, ok.

@hybridlore

On docs?

@hybridlore

Did you check her access to see if she’s authorized to edit?

@hybridlore

Okay, I only got one.

idk if you saw my email, but it won’t let me past your safety measures.

@hybridlore

Where are the links?

@hybridlore

Oh yay!! I was so sad when I went to comment and realized I couldn’t.

@hybridlore     @keilah-h

Lolololol.

Okay, well Joseph and Amelia ended up having nine kids. Mercy was the oldest of their children, with Beric being the oldest through adoption. (of that makes sense)

Beric and Quin designed a network of guys who went throughout Ardenta helping farmers recover land and people rebuild after the war. These g…[Read more]

@hybridlore

No. I can’t. Not without an account. 😥

Could you try using Microsoft? I have an account with them, and it’s not attached to google. It’s honestly safer, which is why I went with them. And You can set it up for free.

@hybridlore

*Crying because I can’t comment or see y’all’s comments*

Nooo, this is so sad.

😭

Oh well. I guess it can’t be helped.

@hybridlore

Yeah, but he doesn’t know about them.

I do though.

if you be nice and say please…..

@ellette-giselle @hybridlore

I honestly have no idea on what my views on this whole election thing are. But I didn’t see Rowan’s conversion to be like, fake or forced or whatever.

The example of that criminal on the cross in the Bible, that happened, so I mean why can’t this one? Y’know?

@hybridlore

yeah, if you let yourself you can see it coming from page 1 of their book. It was always there and always inevitable.

as for Rowan, I believe in Holy election, and because of that, this works. That’s more of a Calvinist view though. Basically, Rowan would have never believed no matter how much time he had, unless God called him. A…[Read more]

@hybridlore

So my dad just finished your report for Alec last night. Would you like me to email it, or copy and past it here?

Also, I just shut down my google account, and when I did, I realized I can no longer access you book! Is there a way I can do that without google?

@freed_and_redeemed      @hybridlore     @koshka     @keilah-h       @elishavet-pidyon       @linus-smallprint

Okay all. Ready, set, here we go!

NEXT SECTION!

    Leon and Julian did not go back to sleep that night. They spent the remainder of those dark hours in prayer for their friends, the other believers, and even their enemies. They…

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@keilah-h

Thanks. I might!

@hybridlore

I know!!!!!! I’m a terrible author!!! 😱😭

Wait a sec…… isn’t it my goal to make the reader miserable? 😈🤣

I promise to send the next section today. Right now. I’m running final edits this very moment.

@hybridlore

I was trying, but I think I’m out of time today. I almost had it done too. 😥