@hybridlore
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
@hybridlore @euodia-vision @freedomwriter76 @smiley @mineralizedwritings @esther-c @acancello @rae
So the intrusive thoughts won again.
I may or may not have started a new WIP.
I know.
I tried to convince myself not to…but…well………………………..
That didn’t happen.
This WIP is really special to me because it’s an autobiography of sorts of my sum…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
@hybridlore @euodia-vision @freedomwriter76 @smiley @mineralizedwritings @esther-c @acancello @rae
So the intrusive thoughts won again.
I may or may not have started a new WIP.
I know.
I tried to convince myself not to…but…well………………………..
That didn’t happen.
This WIP is really special to me because it’s an autobiography…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Worldbuilding help and discussions! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Fair enough, sounds good to me!
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years, 5 months ago
Thanks! I’m glad you like them, Layson’s shoes are such a odd shape it makes me cringe XD I haven’t drawn feet very much
Thank you!! <3
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 years, 5 months ago
Thanks!! 😄
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years, 5 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @euodia-vision @keilah-h @loopylin @whalekeeper @smiley @hybridlore
AHHH wait pics are working?
Allow me.
XD
This has been my big project for the last week or two! From left to right, Layson, Tauren, Lesli.

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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Worldbuilding help and discussions! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Yeah, I missed your conversation with @jonas until now, but if I’m understanding you correctly, your wanting to power spaceships with sound. Sound as a force has been used to manipulate objects in precise ways, but they would have to be ridiculously light, and the cases where we have done such a thing, it’s an object surrounded by…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Worldbuilding help and discussions! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
No problem!
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Worldbuilding help and discussions! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Oh, okay. Yeah, I’m not sure if sound could be used to power something, but if it could, I actually don’t think the lack of sound propagation in space would be a problem, because the sound would work inside the spaceships, so unless they need to use sound from outside, it could still potentially work.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Worldbuilding help and discussions! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Oh. How is sound working in space related to this? I’m a bit confused.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Worldbuilding help and discussions! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Oh, so, these spaceships you’re creating run on sound somehow, and you want help thinking of a different way to power them?
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Worldbuilding help and discussions! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
So your idea requires sound to work in space? I’m not sure I follow completely.
I can’t personally think of a good way for sound to work in space, unless you’re fundamentally changing physics. Given that sound propagates only in media, as in real life, the only thing I could think of is having space be actually filled with gas,…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Worldbuilding help and discussions! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
I think solid debris wouldn’t help, because sound needs a medium to propagate through. On earth, sound is carried by air molecules bumping into each other repeatedly. It can move through solids and liquids as well, but without air for the sound to move through, it won’t reach the space debris in the first place. Light travels without…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Does anyone want to try Y-dubs/YWW with me??? in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Oh, I should probably tag people if I want people to reply…XD
*facepalms*
@acancello @grcr @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @esther-c @hybridlore @beth-torres @anyone-else
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Trailblazer replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 5 months ago
It’s a whole thing… Rae will randomly start filling up the Character Party chat with pictures of dragons.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 5 months ago
You don’t want to know. lol
Go to page 199 (i think) of the Character Party to find out what happens and how to annoy Jonas.
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Trailblazer replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 5 months ago
@hybridlore @savannah_grace2009
Here’s the next part:
May was an unusually dry month, drier than any I’d seen before. Pa and Mama were fearful of fires, always exercising caution when cooking. Any wayward spark from the chimney could catch the dry brush and start an inferno.
On a Sunday afternoon, shortly after we’d finished planting, Mam…[Read more]
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Trailblazer replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 5 months ago
@hybridlore @savannah_grace2009
OK, thanks for the input! Maybe I’ll just write a couple scenes in Etta’s POV and see what happens… I wouldn’t have to keep them as part of the story, but maybe it would be helpful to see some of my characters from a different set of eyes.
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Trailblazer replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 5 months ago
@hybridlore @savannah_grace2009
I just had this thought: what if I added Etta’s POV to the whole story? Like switching back and forth between Libbie and Etta’s perspectives? I think it would be fun, and might help develop some of the side characters better, but it also might make things more confusing, and for simplicity’s sake might be better…[Read more]
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Trailblazer replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 5 months ago
@hybridlore @savannah_grace2009
Let me know if any of this needs to be fleshed out more (or if it moves too fast and there should be more specific scenarios).
Things are about to get dicey…
1886
Come spring, many changes occurred. The first was Bert Hawley asking Pa for Clara’s hand in marriage. The wedding was planned for June, and Clara w…[Read more]
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