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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
I mean like having a page in there that says, “Part 2” Like in the unabridged Little Women.
Maybe someone else from the church could go with him? Maybe because Joseph is so young, Darrien and Noah decide he needs a partner?
Someone’s jumping the gun.
How about you just hold your horses and wait and see. lololololol.
(It may be…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
Yes, it is a time jump!!!! If it’s too jolting, I may split the sections into parts. I’ll see what Linus says.
Uh, no, he’s not. Aaron was a missionary. Joseph is looking to become an elder. It’s two different things. He wants to be Aaron, but he can’t. That’s not what he’s been called to do.
And I’m not really sure how much more…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
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If this book had a theme song, this would have to be it. I have listened to it several times while editing, and this just about embodies the whole story.
What do y’all think?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
@hybridlore  @linus-smallprint   @koshka  @keilah-h   @elishavet-pidyon
NEXT SECTION
The wind blew gently on the roof of the little house in the middle of the great capital city of Ardenta. On the roof, his legs crossed and a Bible on his knees, was a young man. He was reading intently, and every now and then he leant over to write dow…
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Ellette Giselle posted a new activity comment 1 year, 5 months ago
Wait, when did you read that? I didn’t think I posted any.
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whaley replied to the topic Character Hunger Games (Inspired by YWW) in the forum Genre-Writing 1 year, 5 months ago
plus it all depends on where you caught them in their arcs.
I’m planning to use creative liberties because of this, lol. After all, if some of these people turn violent in the game, that’s not accurate to their canon internal values. This is alternate noncanon; the most moral, innocent character might defenestrate their…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 1 year, 5 months ago
I write a very wide variety of things.My dystopian stuff is me being a conspiracy theorist.
This one is about a young farmer living in a country that faced Civil War plus a 3rd Word War. The country was split in half and the East in uninhabitable and forbidden, and the West is under dictatorship. The idea of family has been…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 1 year, 5 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 1 year, 5 months ago
uhu. We’ll see about that.
I’m currently trying to wrap up another novel, but I may post more later. If not, maybe Monday morning.
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Ellette Giselle posted a new activity comment 1 year, 5 months ago
Yeah it is sad. But so’s her story.
It’s very russian sounding. I am partial to russian music. lol.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 1 year, 5 months ago
Oh no. I will not change my mind.
So I’ll just keep writing away, but if the protection squad activates then I’ll deal with it. lolololol.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 1 year, 5 months ago
Too bad you didn’t know about this before.
Now you’re too late to save Adrian.
BRAWWWWWHAAAAAH
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 1 year, 5 months ago
You better add that those are my characters, because I know at least Freedom has a Leon. And she’s actually been pretty nice to him.
Lately.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 1 year, 5 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 1 year, 5 months ago
The protection squad was formed for Freedom and Godlyfantasy’s characters. Let’s see, I think Riker, Paxton, and….. ugh, I can’t remember. There were a couple other on there. I think Leon got added too. They would go and kidnap them so that Freedom and Godly couldn’t kill them. Then they would have to try to get their characters…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 1 year, 5 months ago
You like Julian and Leon, eh?
Hmmm. *makes dark and devious plans*
lol. just joking.
maybe.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 1 year, 5 months ago
I know I did.
Someone threatened to add Rory to the protection squad, but I think Joseph needs it the most. lololol.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
Oh go ahead and keep reading. I was meaning you aren’t someone who has gotten backstory detail because you asked too many questions and I gave in and answered. lolololol.
Yes! You are completely correct. Except they were betrothed. They were supposed to be married the month after she died. So, yeah, that was the initial blow, and…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 1 year, 5 months ago
yes, you would be right.
Kill Joseph?
Hmm.
I like it.
lololololol.
Don’t worry, the book is already written, so weather he lives or dies is out of your hands. 😉
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 1 year, 5 months ago
Go away, you aren’t allowed to snoop in my dark character killing past! *hissss*
lolololol.
I think you know. But if you don’t, you’ll find out soon enough.
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I’m not sure where… it was just a snippet. The part where the mc was talking to his brother about wanting to get married.
Ah, I remember now! I shared a scene when I shared their mood boards!
Yeah, that’s probably what it was 😅 I was stalking the forum and saw it.
makes sense.
Hey, I have a question. How would you feel about exchanging emails?
@ellette-giselle
That’s good with me! I might not be able to give you my main one since my mom prefers me to use a different one for people I don’t know irl. Give me a sec and I’ll figure it out.
Wonderful!