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CHAPTERs 14-15!!!!!!!

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I know! Poor guy!

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Chapters 12-13!!!!

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She’s my favorite, may I have mercy on her soul. XD

I think I like her dad. Is he Dali?

Yes, he’s Dali. I call Lucille’s mum by her name as well. It feels more humanizing to call him that in this story rather than calling him ‘her dad’ or Dad.

I also found her description of her hair fascinating. Is it just metaphor, or does it…

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Theme song for Jonathan in current stage of arc and somewhat forward.

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Oh, I forgot that chapter ended there. 🙃

Yeah, they’ve turned in plenty of people. For Jonathan’s parents it was more Agent retaliation. We’re here to pick up the kid. You don’t have the kid? Fine, you pay for it. That sort of thing.

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what was sweet?

No, the gang was not involved in that one. They were killed because they hid Jonathan.

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NEXT CHAPTERS!!!

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Yes. I did.

Well, you could….. I’d just have to write it……

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I do two chapters each day and then post them. I may jump the gun today so that I have some fallback though.

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This is draft number…… 7. I think.

I wrote this when I was 13 and have done rewrites almost every year since. This time I scrapped the draft and started over completely since I know the story inside and out. I feel like I can breathe again and it’s going much better.

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Do you!!? I like him too. 😁

I’m so glad you like it. I’m actually also starting to like it as well.

Any thoughts about the new situation Jonathan is in? Also, out of curiosity, what makes you like Jim? (I like him, but i know his whole arc. I’m interested to see what you like. )

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CHAPTER 7 and 8!!!!

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Leaving for my friend’s wedding in a few minutes. Won’t be back until late this night. I’m running some of the behind the scenes.

Plus, I don’t see any edits so I’m assuming only a few people got yesterday’s chapters read. So, I’ll…[Read more]

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Thank you!!!  Yes, he’s great.

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and anyone else interested….. @koshka     @keilah-h       @elishavet-pidyon       @theducktator     @grcr   @whalekeeper

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If anyone is interested, I would have to call this the theme song of the book.

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Thanks!! I really like these moodboards too. I love the feel.

Aw thanks! I love Amber.

Hmm. We’ll have to see.

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Beast. *sigh* almost as bad as Smaug the laptop.

Good. I like Jim too! ☺️

Want me to make a moodboard for him?!

Poor kiddo.

Hmm, I guess you’ll have to keep reading to find out.

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I know!!!!

Really? Thanks so much!

What do you think of Jim?

Also, did you expect his parents to die?