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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 months, 3 weeks ago
hmm. yeah, I suppose.
Did you see what Abby said at the end of the last chapter? Cracks me up every time I read the comment.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 months, 3 weeks ago
Oh that. hehe.
Yeah, well he was a little bit over the edge.
Did you expect the boy to fight him, or to try and run away with him?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 months, 3 weeks ago
what are you mad about now?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 months, 3 weeks ago
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NEXT CHAPTERS!!!
22-23!!!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 months, 3 weeks ago
Haha. I wish.
Oh, so you want a body, do you? I can go dig it up. Maybe. Government probably burned it through.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 months, 3 weeks ago
Ugh. I want to shake that kid. Or get Jim.Why do my character gotta do dumb things!!! *sob*
Wait what? Huh. I guess. idk, I feel like I made it pretty clear….
Yes!! I love that chapter!!!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 months, 3 weeks ago
@hybridlore    @koshka    @keilah-h     @elishavet-pidyon     @theducktator    @grcr  @whalekeeper
NEXT CHAPTERS!!!
20-21!!!
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Elishavet Elroi posted an update 8 months, 3 weeks ago
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Ok, I wasn’t sure who all to tag, but since I know conversations in this side of the site can be hard to access, I went with as many as I thought would be interested or have similar questions.
With the Summer Writing group, I know several of us are…[Read more] -
Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 months, 3 weeks ago
Oh. Duh.
I was thinking in response to Jonathan falling. I didn’t even think of the other chapter.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 months, 3 weeks ago
What?!?! But Rick is so sweet and nice!!
*stares at you with total deadpan face*
Poor Jim? Why poor Jim?
Thanks so much!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 months, 3 weeks ago
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NEXT CHAPTERS!!!
18-19
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 months, 3 weeks ago
…. and then he got pushed off a building.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 months, 3 weeks ago
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NEXT CHAPTERS!!!
PART 2
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 months, 3 weeks ago
The question is…. is that good or bad? 🤣
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 months, 4 weeks ago
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CHAPTERs 14-15!!!!!!!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 months, 4 weeks ago
I know! Poor guy!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 months, 4 weeks ago
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Chapters 12-13!!!!
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 4 weeks ago
She’s my favorite, may I have mercy on her soul. XD
I think I like her dad. Is he Dali?
Yes, he’s Dali. I call Lucille’s mum by her name as well. It feels more humanizing to call him that in this story rather than calling him ‘her dad’ or Dad.
I also found her description of her hair fascinating. Is it just metaphor, or does it…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 months, 4 weeks ago
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Theme song for Jonathan in current stage of arc and somewhat forward.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months ago
Oh, I forgot that chapter ended there. 🙃
Yeah, they’ve turned in plenty of people. For Jonathan’s parents it was more Agent retaliation. We’re here to pick up the kid. You don’t have the kid? Fine, you pay for it. That sort of thing.
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That sounds like a good idea. Would the email group be just for your draft, or would it be for everyone to share stuff?
Glad you approve! 😀 I sure hope not just for mine. XD Depending on the type of doc, we might share access to a copy of the manuscript to one thread itself, comment inside the docs, and leave the thread to bugging each other and other general imperatives. Alternately, we could make separate threads for each project, which would have the advantage…[Read more]
Ok cool. Sign me up.
(I don’t remember if you have my email but I know someone out there does)
I have several emails from those group calls. Does yours by chance contain a play on the word “ladybug”? Or is that someone else?
Yup that’s me. Old nickname
I’m up for anything—sharing directly here, sharing through email…
I like this idea a lot though. Yeah, count me in. 🙂
Will do! 😀
Ooo, yes! I’ve been hoping for something like this.
Great!