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@hybridlore

Okay, that’s reasonable.

 

You win.

@hybridlore

No, you can’t just say that. Give me a literary reason why I should do this rather then the other one. Why is this better?

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ALTERNATE NEXT SECTION!!!!!

 

Please be honest as y’all read this, because saving the boys is going to be a HUGE change. However, I think it may be the right one, and some interesting things happened that makes me think so. However, I am still on the edge, a…[Read more]

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Just in case anyone is backing out because they don’t have animal characters, let me say: that’s okay.

 

You can create an animal character, or you can actually…[Read more]

@hybridlore   @koshka

Don’t rub it in.

@hybridlore   @koshka

having hybridlore on the protection squad is scary! Why did I ever tell her about it?

@hybridlore   @koshka

 

okay!! Fine!! I give in.

I’ll rewrite that whole scene tomorrow.

y’all win.

*slams down pencil in despair.*

it actually won’t hurt the plot much, and you are actually making sense.

fine. I’ll do it.

they go free. Both of them.

I can’t believe I’m doing this.

@hybridlore

*GASPETH*

*Throws confetti*

*Offers you a medal of honor for your bravery in the Character Protection Squad service*

@hybridlore

*Straightens sunglasses*

 

@ellette-giselle

I’d say don’t kill the boys. You could bring them close, scare the living daylights out of the others, but don’t kill them.

I expected them to get captured and killed. It felt like “here we go again”. So many characters by this time have been killed, that it was almost…boring? Change…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Yes you are you little…. little…… I don’t know what you are.

Dangerous person.

 

@whalekeeper

Lol. I’m having a great day. Having a lot of fun plotting my next book and building character boards and aesthetics.

@hybridlore

Oh good grief.

I’m gonna do it.

I’m gonna save him.

Eric’s gonna live.

 

How on earth did you get me to do that?

I can’t believe I’m going to do this.

 

You are dangerous.

Also @ellette-giselle @hybridlore I just saw your character death intervention and I’m quite entertained by it. 😂 Y’all are feeding the #savethecharrie movement. People on here never change.

@hybridlore

True. I’m not denying that he isn’t young. He’s just not shockingly young. Especially in that age and culture, he’s considered a man and could have a family and kids.

Eric is still a kid in there eyes.

 

And no, i can’t change the age because i’d have to do rewrites in the first book and I don’t want to. lol. plus, that makies him…[Read more]

@hybridlore

He’s not THAT young. Adrian was younger then him when he died.

@ellette-giselle

Do you think it’s fine as long as this is the last one……. (for a while.)

This appears to be what is moving the Ardentaians and some of the soliders to question who the Christians are.

I think part of the problem is that, yes, this is causing more people to become Christians, and that is good of course, but characters are disap…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Look, if you can get at least two more people on this forum to agree with you……….

 

@hybridlore

Stop it.

Go away.

I literally have my finger hanging over the delete button for that scene.

 

 

@hybridlore

I don’t know……… what would I even do with him if he survived?

(Besides get him married and all that.)

@hybridlore

But I already submitted it this way. I can’t change it now, KP won’t let me edit that post……………

@hybridlore

Oh shut up.

You’re actually going to convince me to save him.

 

lolololol.