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@ellette-giselle

Aw I’m sorry! I am the same way so you’re not alone!!!!!!!!!

BUT YOUR SHORT STORY ON YOUR MAGAZINE WAS SO GOOD I GOT CHILLS!!!!

I’ll ask one of my guy friends tonight for ya! XD XD

I get that it would be awkward so I got you girl

@savannah_grace2009

 

I get that! Just let us know if you’re ever sick of critiques and just want to hear the positive stuff to get encouraged!

Haha, but that would be all the time…… lol. I don’t like getting told there’s something wrong with my book, but I also know that it will NEVER get better if I don’t have real help from people l…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Aw I’m sorry :/

I get that! Just let us know if you’re ever sick of critiques and just want to hear the positive stuff to get encouraged!

I’d say…just interview some of your guy friends and ask them to give you a cheat sheet XD XD but I think Whaley’s right, they really do just vibe lol

@whalekeeper @savannah_grace2009

Thanks so much! I’m feeling a bit better now.

I had a really rough, hectic day at work, and it’s just one of those days when I want to cry about everything. You know? (Girls, you know what I mean. Linus is probably lost. haha)

As for the 4 book thing, I don’t think I have enough to do 4 books. I will try…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint Please correct me if I’m wrong about guys

The illustrations are great! I love the sibling drawing.

I don’t know what that would be! If they were girls it would be easy! I just don’t know how guys “connect” and whenever I try to write it my brothers look like they’re going to throw up. They say I make them too girly in their getting to know each other, so I just kinda steer clear. An…

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@keilah-h

Thank you!

And so cool!

@ellette-giselle

Um, yeah. His fear of the unknown already came up a little bit in the barn, and though he got over it there, it is still under the surface and it will come again. I promise.

Maybe you could make his fear a lot stronger, like showing us his thoughts instead of telling us them?

“Well then I don’t see how much help you’ll be,”…

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Oh wow I missed y’all’s messages XD

@ellette-giselle

I would still love feedback on the other stuff as we went, but I’m a little at a loss with Aaron at the moment.

Thank y’all so, so much. I hope y’all can tell that this really is helpful…… I can see there’s a problem now…… I just have to fix it………

I understand what it feels like to get mixed feedback about a character, it’s so fr…[Read more]

 

Aaron looks like he’s kind of mischievous. Thanks for sharing these!

He kinda is at times. lol.

By the way, would you mind if I recruited you to read/give feedback on my project? It is a fantasy story set in a world that is similar in some ways to the Wingfeather world. If you don’t want to or don’t have the time, that is all right.

I was l…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 I finished another creature! Here’s a Suilean with his wings spread:

@theshadow I have most of the rest of the team if you go a page or so back.

@linus-smallprint

How far through the story are we?

The beginning. Literally. Like, there is a LOT more to go. 1/8 maybe?

Gotchya. Were there others besides Sabina who did not convert?

yes. I mentioned that there were……. was that not clear enough? should I try to mention a bit more about that? By the time they leave the village a majority of…[Read more]

and I actually drew Aaron and like the drawing!!

Does he look like he’s leaning back to y’all? I can’t figure it out…. but he looks like he’s leaning in that one on the far right……idk, maybe I’ve been staring at it for too long.

@linus-smallprint  @savannah_grace2009 @whalekeeper

Anyone want to see some sketches for LTBL that I did yesterday? Here they are.

I don’t think I like her eyes…… I’ll have to fix them.

@kyronthearcanin @rae @theducktator @theshadow @princesachronicle22

Sniper

The wolves…were talkin’. Standin’ on their hind legs, too.

“What are you?” one asked, its voice soundin’ oddly female. “And I wouldn’t try anything. I see those weapons.”

I lowered my gun.

“What Naria means is that we just woke up in one of those cabins, and we’…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint  @savannah_grace2009 @whalekeeper

Ugh. It ate my response. I’m going to cry and give up! I can’t do this anymore!

Ok, I’ve gotten a hold of myself. First let’s start with something funny.

I felt a great disturbance in the Force, as if millions of voices suddenly cried out in terror (some were probably named Aaron) and were…

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@rae I have no idea. I would assume cheese exists in the Star Wars universe but they don’t use it as an expression

also, great choices lol.