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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
Oh, my bad. When readers are reading the books without gaps in the middle, it would probably be easier, too. But yeah, just an intro to make it clear that it’s the same people would be great.
Thats what I’m thinking, but yeah, I can throw that it. I plan to release these as a box set all at once, so that should help.
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Loopy replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 4 months ago
@whalekeeper @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @ellette-giselle
Thanks! I might draw her more. She’s fun. I named her Bubble.
@keilah
lol, what game is it?
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Enid replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 4 months ago
Thx! It looks like your bunny’s mind is filled with bubbly dreams. Reminds me of a gumball machine 😋
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
@theducktator @elishavet-pidyon
Yes, it was quite fun. :p Although I slept in for a while after.
Did you go with anyone?
I went with my friends. Half of us had partners, but the other half just wanted wholesome group dancing. It was a good mix.
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Enid replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
@freed_and_redeemed
The hurried navigation through the pews is all too real, lol.The brunette shrugged.
This is the feminine version of a french word, so unless I’m misunderstanding who is speaking here – I think it’s Riker – this should be brunet. Same difference between blonde and blond.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
Especially with the way that you left off the last book–with Rolf, Roland, and Aelic getting separated from Leon and Julian because they wanted to go visit their family (right?), I think you should remind us.
No, they haven’t traveled far enough for that to be a thing yet. So far they are all heading in the same direction t…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Interviews in the forum Characters 1 year, 4 months ago
What exactly IS your job?
Huntress: Well……We used to be mercenaries. Hired guns. We were supposed to guard our employer’s mine in an asteroid belt from his brother’s team, but it turns out it was all a ruse and the only reason we were fighting was because a sneaky Sunekite provoked the battle as revenge for the brothers’…[Read more]
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
First time I’ve ever laughed reading one of your scenes. Poor lover boy Leon. XD
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 4 months ago
@loopylin very cool!! The drawing reminds me a little of a character in one of the video games my brother plays. Unfortunately, he happens to hate her cause she’s indirectly responsible for killing him and making him lose a really good win streak. lol
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 4 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
Sorry! I was gone for a minute!
YAY!!!
Ooo, poor Leon. 🤣
I like this! I can’t wait to actually read it in the book! I’m super excited!!!!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
Yes, because some of us are too stoopid to remember.
Oh.
Okay.
Rough as in violent, or rough as in not turning out the way you hoped it would? Guess I will find out.
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… defiantly violent rough, yup.Yeah……. and sad. And Brutal.
I know Hans, but who are these two?
Lieutenant Roth was the man Hans and his compa…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
@ellette-giselle hehe, ok then🤭
(not a finished scene btw, but a snippet)
The Schind family looked exhausted, barely awake.
Not that Leon doubted that he probably looked much the same.
Thoughts of Germany had reawakened thoughts, memories, and even nightmares that plagued his sleep and sometimes even his waking moments.
He shifted on the…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
@ellette-giselle hehe thank youuuu🤭
and no, this is actually a section from The Bois’ book🫶😂
(and I’ll fix those typos, this was completely unedited, so😂)
tho I could share a snippet from Book 3 if you wanted👀
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
*squeak of delight*
YAY!!! SECTION!!
Aw, so sad. 😭
Really good! Is this from book 3?!?!
I can’t wait to read it!!!!
caught two typos.
left to the mercy of his Nazi captors, whom had very little mercy
Should be “who”
and
he crouched slightly in front of the sixteen-year-old’s, meeting their t…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
@ellette-giselle @rae @savannah_grace2009 @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @godlyfantasy12 @anyone-else-idk
I love them y’all😭🫶
So much had crumbled.
So many lives had been lost.
Leo sank against the wall, fists clenching and unclenching, every breath heavy, tears blurring his vision.
Dietrich…Fin…so many lives had been lost.
And Eze…
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freedom replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
@ellette-giselle haha I’m glad you like my commentary😂
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
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freedom replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
@ellette-giselle You can tag me, sure! But I can’t make any promises on me reading all of the sections😅🫶
and that feeling definitely came across in the scene
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