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@freed_and_redeemed

Oof lol, I missed hard with the Riker ideas. 😂 So you’re sticking with the same internal ideas throughout all three books? Is there, like, a clear turning point at the end of the first book, so you know where to move forward? I’d guess you included some revelation/change with both guys, so you could start there. Then make a…[Read more]

@esther-c

Thank you so much!! *enjoys cake*

@whalekeeper

Thanks!! I’m definitely in love with the cover, though it’ll be difficult to match when I make book 2’s cover. We’ll see what I can come up with XD

Long story short, External conflict is not my forte. I much more prefer internal conflict😂

@whalekeeper Ty for the ideas, girlie 💖

The ideas for Leon are def more for his 2nd book

Tho he still struggles with grief, remaining pain, and still his PTSD (Riker also still wrestles with PTSD, both from the camp and from his abused childhood🫠😅), he’s left the vengeance behind, leaving the men that harmed him in God’s hands

and as for Riker,…[Read more]

@theshadow @keilah-h @princesachronicle22

Silvanis

Once he saw the creature, Silvanis instinctively pushed Fairy behind him. When she tried to step past him, he pushed her back, a pale glow coming to his right hand.

@kyronthearcanin

Congrats, the cover looks so cool!!! Writing a whole book is crazy committed✨🤩

@freed_and_redeemed

Oh lol I can give you some ideas!! Plot is always hard 😝

They might not be along the lines of what your goals are, but just some thoughts. External conflict doesn’t have to be super action-y, it just has to be a character taking…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

XD yes I love him!

Aw that other doodle looks amazing!

@kyronthearcanin

Yayyy!!!!! That’s so exciting!!! I’m so happy for you Ava!!! 🥳 *cake for everyone* 🎂

@ellette-giselle

Oki I have a doodle for you! I enjoyed practicing line hardness, since that’s a weakness of mine. So your charries helped 🤣

@freed-and-redeemed @grcr

Thx for the kind words! 🥰 You are on the hold list lol

@mineralizedwritings

YAAYyYy haha he does look like a doll 🤣🤣 Glad I could make you happy!! ❤️

@ellette-giselle

Amazon!

@highscribeofaetherium

Thank you!!

@freed_and_redeemed

Thanks so much!!!

@theshadow @rae

Sniper

“Can we go at it already?” Trevor looked into the woods impatiently.

“Steady, mate.” I held up my hand to stop him from rushin’ forward. “We don’t know its threat level yet.”

The thing growled and stepped into view. It was somethin’ I’d neva seen before–and it was hideous if ya asked me.

It looked like some kinda…[Read more]

Here’s a funny scene for a change.

“Ow!” howled Jonathan. “Stop it, Jim!”

Jim, kitchen scissors in hand, was attacking Jonathan’s messy hair. What with the blood, sweat, and two weeks lying in bed, it was frightful. Over the year, Jonathan had let it grow down almost to his shoulders, but now that it was a matted mess, Jim had decided i…

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@whalekeeper

aww their cute!

I have a character, too—whenever a spot opens up. 🙂

It probably wouldn’t fit on his head anyway, even with a chinstrap like they sometimes have.

@linus-smallprint lol I just met Oliver the gorb and I have to say I like him because he’s just like my two Aussie characters….XD

I really hope he won’t betray Alan and Tyn or something. (By the way, I like Tyn, She’s really cool.)

Despite the fact that you said Lyens explicitly forbid wearing hats, I keep imagining Oliver wearing a slouch…[Read more]

@whalekeeper “niece church” lol

@calyhuge your signature haha

I don’t know anyone on here in real life. When my brother gets a bit older I think I’m gonna ask him to join because he has the most amazing story ideas, he’s just not a huge fan of writing them down.

@grcr

You are very welcome! I’m glad you like her.

@linus-smallprint Well, I think the story is solid, but there are a lot of little missed punctuation and stuff that could be fixed. That’s fine though, it didn’t make the story less enjoyable.