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@ellette-giselle

AGREED!

XD

@whalekeeper

Oh no! I’ll be praying for you. Is there any specific way I can be doing that?

yes!! Fire away!! I’m ready for it now! I think I’m prepared for people to criticize Aaron.

Your writing output is still so prolific, that’s great!

Aw!! Thank you! That’s so encouraging!

You killed the king and that made me 100% sad!!! WHY?!?!?! 😭…

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Some completely positive notes <3

1. Your writing output is still so prolific, that’s great!! Most writers slow down towards the middle of a story, including myself.

2. I enjoy the king character. He seems like a straightforward, honorable guy who might be a tad prideful but still attempting to be a leader. He shouldn’t die. Nor should Sabina.…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I’m still following! Sorry, I was actually having a rough time the same week, so I took a break from KP. 😅 I will probably continue to spend time away from here due to senior projects.

So, I do have more Aaron notes since you started exploring his trust issues. They are on the constructive side of things. I want to make sure you…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

yes!! I would love more feedback! I’m so sorry if I made it seem like I didn’t!

I was having a rough day when the whole Aaron critique thing happened. 😅

please, go right ahead!! I would love your thoughts! Sorry I haven’t been tagging you! I thought you were no longer interested in this!

I’ve always struggled with drawing a cartoon version of myself but now I have to XD

@loopylin

You and the stuffy are so cuuuuuuute!! Ack!! ❤️🥺 I picture you similarly to this. The pastels are so you. 

@grcr

Yeah maybe… to give everyone time to respond to Keilah

That’s just what I was thinking.

I might join this despite my art requests page XD

Ok, here is the next (REALLY LONG!) section! Enjoy!!! I am hoping for LOT’S of feedback on this because I do some intense stuff! lol.

The first thing Aaron was aware of were shouts and the clash of steel. Sword fighting? But…

Aaron raised his aching head. He sat up and wiped blood from his face, and then reached for the wall and shakily p…

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Heeyy, I have more feedback whenever you want it 😛

@ellette-giselle

Aw thanks! 😊

Yeah maybe… to give everyone time to respond to Keilah… idk, it’s up to you… tomorrow’s probably good though!

@grcr

Aw, thank you! Your’s was amazing too! Man, the paint flecks looked so real!!!

Ok, awesome! So, I should probably wait a few days, right? Like maybe give y’all a character tomorrow or Wednesday?

@linus-smallprint

HEY, THANKS SO MUCH! You know, that’s the first time anyone has ever said that to me.

So far I have no problem besides the ones I already mentioned, and honestly I’ll have to see where you take the story. I would say that right now we all trust Oliver as a very good character, so I would start to bring out more of him being a…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Congratulations and good job!! 😄

I don’t think anyone called next, so I think you’re welcome to go ahead!

@keilah-h

Wait! Really!!! Wow! Thank you so much!!

Everyone else did such a good job!! Wonderful drawings y’all!!

well…… dis anyone else call next character? If not, I would really love to have a go!

@grcr @linus-smallprint @rae @ellette-giselle ok! I still don’t have my own drawing of the character, but my brother and I will judge each of your drawings on how close they were to our imagining of Feather!

They were all really good and really close to my thoughts. You all got the scar in the right place, too!

• I like the way you did the…

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@linus-smallprint

do it’s an alternate reality. For instance, the Empire is Rome set in the German alps with Germanic people.

Ardenta is a French-Swiss cross in culture and people with more of a French-Scotch lowland setting.

Vendailia is an Anglo Saxon Britton cross.

so yeah, basically takes place in our world if some of the countries were s…[Read more]