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@the_lost-journal

Last time I checked, your characters jumped onto the boat with Rina and the rebel NPCs to escape the city. Group 1 is reasonably far off inside the city, fighting. So you are not with our group. 🙃

@grcr

You’re good, lots of people are posting long sections. ;] No one minds at all, it helps to move things forward.

@jonas @loopylin @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @rae @grcr @raxforge

Marcel — Elderstrand (w/Group 1)

So many enemies still stood firm. But there was still hope to win, as long as everyone worked together.

Marcel took quick…[Read more]

Stars! I’m not even kidding you, I have 78 notifications mostly from you guys on here. XD.

Poor Jonas. What does his notif box look like with Adventure RP?!

I’m happy that you all are enjoying yourselves, so keep it up, I just wanted to share that with you so we can all have a good laugh and you can understand why I might not reply to stuff r…[Read more]

@koshka

Hear, hear! At least, all the good books.

@koshka

Oh, good. For a moment, I was worried you were saying there were already enough books for YA and MG.

@koshka

Really though, if you want to write for kid’s or YA, know that there’s not a lot of places so in need of what you have to say.

I’m sorry, could you rewrite this sentence? I don’t think I understand it.

Hmm…yes, I agree with you about the Dawn. Totally.

@elishavet-pidyon

And yes, Yigal was military. There’s a lot of flower/name symbolism in the story… did you catch it?

Yes, I did catch it…but I didn’t know that it was related to the military. Guess I learned something new.

@koshka

Look out. I’m a mildly passionate children’s writer, and I’m always ready to recruit a few more. 😉

What do you mean??

@raxforge

Oh my gosh. I’m sure Tim never did that. At least, I hope he wouldn’t. His poor grandfather. So, what that how he got his scar? Or was it really in the war?

@calyhuge

Woah. I just read your story. I can see many people saying it’s gross…but it’s kind of intriguing. (I have a fascination for popping abscesses and pussy things like that.) Most people wouldn’t anthropomorphize pus.

Your writing style reminds me of my brother’s. Must be a boy thing!

If you aren’t able to request access to my…[Read more]

@koshka

here you go!

my charries confronting each other on top of a train. Inspired by the hurricane that hit Florida last month; the wind sounds reminded me of what it would be like standing on top of a fast moving vehicle such as a train, so I drew this. Then I wrote a scene for why they were confronting each other, and then I revised it a…[Read more]

I also have the drawing I based the original scene off of if anyone wants to see it.

@everyone but @rae especially

This….barely counts as the story of a scar, or a short story. LOL.

I had a much better one in mind but just didn’t have the drive to write it. So I pulled out a scene I had written for practice and added some extras to it, polished it down, etc.

So instead of a clear, nicely written short story, you get three…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Well, there’s nothing new under the sun!

That’s certainly true!

@liberty

HA! That is so funny!

Well, there’s nothing new under the sun!

@calyhuge

UGH!

That is sick!

There is no way that’s winning.

ugh, ugh, ugh!

Okay, I do have to admit I was laughing my head off, but man that was so sick. (and I mean that the bad way.)

Remind me to never read your stuff again.

Okay, I guess it wasn’t all that bad.

but good grief.

@elishavet-pidyon

Was Yigal in the military?

@ellette-giselle

The concept (a boy is only allowed to see the sun, and a girl is always in darkness) is so much like yours!

@calyhuge

I think requesting access is the only way.

@liberty

Thank you! I’m glad you liked it!

No, but I’ve always wanted to read it. I just haven’t gotten my hands on it yet. The George McDonald one, right?

@koshka

Yeah…that’s what I’ve been wrestling with. I first thought it would be MG, but as I worked more on the plot, I started thinking, “This sounds more like YA.” But I didn’t like the idea of writing it for YA. I’ll see more when I start writing it and see the tone of the story more, but for now, I’m “writing” it for both age groups.