@hybridlore
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Enid replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Ah, but what happened to Fel?
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Loopy replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
I second this. Don’t.
Yeah, actually, sorry I brought it up at all. It’s super dark. I just find government conspiracies interesting. But I forget there are younger people on here sometimes so please just ignore that.
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-GRCR- replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Ooo that looks interesting!!
When and if you do share your short story, do tag me—I’d love to read it!! 😃 -
Enid replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
But I’m happy with that
And that’s exactly why some of my characters are just chill and happy. There’s nothing less deep about having an average backstory. I can think of some characters who are super shallow because the writer thought trauma equals character depth.
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HighScribe replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
(pls no one research that if you’re sensitive)
I second this. Don’t.
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Loopy replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Felicity probably has the worst backstory of my characters, but it comes no where near as bad as those. But I’m happy with that
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-GRCR- replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 1 year, 9 months ago
Yes, that totally works!
Don’t worry too much about writing him wrong. He’s a fairly newish character of mine, so I’m still working out personality and all. And basically anything you do with him might be inspirational as I develop him further! 😜
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Loopy replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Sounds like an interesting story. Reminds me of MK ultra stuff (pls no one research that if you’re sensitive)
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Enid replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Honestly I don’t know XD I told someone I wasn’t going to post the words I wrote because they were too depressing, and it kind of escalated from there.
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Ruth replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
plus another who was kidnapped and experimented on and trained as a little child
which mentally messed him up enough that he acts like a little kid
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Enid replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
I would prove that the Lovedream children have darker pasts, but it’s not worth spoiling the whole thing unfortunately. XD My apologies. You’ll just have to take my word for it.
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Ruth replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
meanwhile I have a charrie who watched his family die, his home destroyed and his clan wiped out
another who never knew what it was to be a kid, who killed people from an early age
and another who was created in a lab with mental links to his brothers who were all killed, brothers he watched being created and even named…plus his father is the…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 1 year, 9 months ago
Well, liberty I have a good idea! If you want your charries to stay special here’s what I can do! Your human characters could still have the advantages and disadvantages of a dog! Like they could be super athletic and have great hearing and have a good sense of smell! But they would also be colorblind and easily distracted and a…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Thanks!
Those books are very dark.
I mean, that was just Joe.
Then we get Jack who tried to rebel from the inside and had to watch his whole team, including his cousin, get shot.
And Jonathan and Micheal………
And Nathan……
yeah.
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Enid replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
I like it! A little Ender’s Game, a little something else. It’s giving dystopian. 💁♀️ I’m usually not sure how to react when people explain backstories since it’s out of context, but it sounds like pretty solid trauma, especially for a whole group of protagonists.
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
@anybody
I created a mock cover my Christmas short story! I’m not 100% in love with the title, so it might change. Once I have some alpha readers give me their feedback, I’mma share it on here for y’all to read! But before then, here’s the cover to intrigue you. 😋

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Ruth replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Alpha need a lot of perspective reorientation. Actually I have a close friend who once reacted to a puppy in a very similar way, haha 😝 He even used the word scrawny.
Lol
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
I don’t know what’s worse!! Watching people you love brutally murdered for the pleasure of a bloodthirsty crowd, or being completely abused and brainwashed. Or…. yeah, there’s a lot.
I guess I’ll go with the second.
Joe was ripped away from his family by the government when he was 12 years old. He was marked for government…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 9 months ago
Immaculate vibes. 👌
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Esther posted an update 1 year, 9 months ago
@hybridlore
I added my second draft of the short story to the document! I’m mainly looking for feedback on character, plot, pacing, and prose. Especially parts that seem preachy, repetitive, or seem like I’m info-dumping. I’m open to any feedback and thoughts you have on it, feel free to tear into it and be nit-picky! XD If you catch a gramm…[Read more] - Load More

Okay, thank you so much!! I am so sorry I completely forgot about it after KDWC shut down 🤦. I will try to check it out later today!
No worries at all! I only added the draft into the doc today, so you aren’t really forgetting about anything. 😝