hybridlore

@anyone y’all want a villain rant?

also no context whatsoever hehe

“….I would’ve killed your little flightless twins, of course. Suffocated them in my coils before they knew what was happening.” she said, continuing from some time before we’d come in. She didn’t notice us there. “I would’ve loved to watch the look on your face when I came to…

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@mineralizedwritings

I know. Can’t we just settle nicely in the middle instead of falling off the road on one side or the other? lol.

Anyhow, I think this movie is a fairly well done example of a strong girl who isn’t a long haired guy. I don’t agree with all her lines of thought/reasoning but still it’s a good example of staying more in the…[Read more]

@keilah-h

ty 🥹

@savannah_grace2009

Not at all. Tag me whenever you want.

This is a really good chapter. Well balanced dialogue, not cheesy on the emotions, but enough to make you feel them. Well done.

(I’m really hoping for more Eloy in this draft. *hint hint*)

@linus-smallprint

Now THAT might have just been your best chapter ever. I could feel Alan, I could sense that he was completely trust the Saviour, yet there was also pain with it, but his grief was quiet by now. If you could make the grief in the chapter before this more forceful then it would beautiful contrast to the calm in this one.

Very…[Read more]

@keilah-h @ellette-giselle

I’m glad you liked it! And I’m glad it seemed more realistic than you thought it was going to be, that’s great. Yeah, not a fan of the outfit but I’m glad it was mostly in the trailer.

Yeah the whole tough girl thing is really interesting. It’s weird, but I have a theory to why it happens. For multiple issues, I think…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle @jonas (let me know if I’m tagging you too much, I know you’re probably busy!!!!) this goes for anyone else too, please let me know if you’d like me to stop tagging you lol @highscribeofaetherium @grcr @anyone-else

Here’s a second half of the Lilitu chapter:

(Again, this is unedited so this won’t be the finished product, this is…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

I’m a little behind here, but I should have read everything by Epiphany. Happy Feast of Stephen! My family doesn’t really celebrate Boxing Day; we celebrate my birthday!!! *excited screaming* Also, question, do you read the discussion questions in the backs of books normally? I always ignore them.😅

@highscribeofaetherium

First of all, I don’t know if you had planned for Lilitu to have any more lasting injuries than some cuts and bruises, but from the level of beating he’s just received, he’s likely to have some cracked or broken ribs (which could damage internal organs), and/or a concussion. And if he was knocked out/unconscious for long…

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@ellette-giselle yeah, “girl power” and whatnot is kinda way overblown these days.

Although in the past in many cultures, women were not exactly treated nicely (or sometimes even like people) either, so I think as a society we just kinda vacillate between “too much power” or “too little power” given to them.

not that that’s right, but it’s just…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle lol

I mean, I don’t get the “it’s not Christmasy” thing, If it occurs during Christmas and has themes of Christmas, it is a Christmas movie. I’ve never seen it, but I just looked it up, and if you’re gonna call it “not a Christmas movie” then you might say the same for Home Alone or The Sound of Music, which are also popular…[Read more]

@keilah-h

I mean, this isn’t a matter of personal conviction. This is biological and physiological sense. Few who have sense would disagree with this.

exactly. But a lot of movies and books now days basicly have it be jyst because she’s a girl she can win sort of thing. You know, “girl power” *rolls eyes*

So yeah, I was glad that they didn’t do t…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle I think we’ve all heard you rant about this topic lol

I mean, most of us have female fighter/warrior/soldier/whatever characters for some reason. So we were bound to get the “this is why I don’t quite believe in that” talk (which I don’t think is bad and might actually help us improve our characters)

(another slight…

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@keilah-h

Main character of Die Hard

(which IS a Christmas movie!)

@linus-smallprint     @mineralizedwritings

So my friends got me a ticket and I went into it ready to hate it. I hadn’t seen the trailer, but the cover had a girl in armor on the front, (small spoiler, she never ends up wearing armor ever.) She wears a tight costume for one of her outfits and I don’t love it, but all the rest of her outfits are…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Yes, the humans are upset, this just hasn’t been the focus of the story, and with other things to focus on, such as getting rid of the monster, Alan or worries about Iskyagus, this has not been shown much. I can add some subtle hints later that humans are upset about this. Lyens have so far prevailed over the humans, which they u…

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@theducktator thanks!

@whalekeeper haha yep

@mineralizedwritings yessssss good for you girl!!

if you ever make a manga comic of your writing I would totally read it.

@keilah-h

XD yeah that’s probably it! Manga/anime without the weirdness is what I’m all about.

@linus-smallprint

I think it is high time I read through everything, that way you get a perspective from someone who doesn’t have to wait for each section and reads it in roughly a couple sittings. 👍