@hybridlore
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Enid replied to the topic Want me to draw your character? in the forum Art 1 year, 6 months ago
AAHH it looks so good!!! I love how you did the hair texture!!
That’s definitely a good representation of her. And it didn’t take you very long either, that’s crazy. <3
I don’t even know why. I think it was trying to kill me or something.
So you risked your life on my behalf. 🤣 Thank you so much. <3
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Not sure. It’s been going on ever since they hit the new town.
Maybe page 14?
I’ll have to look if you can’t find it.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
KP is breaking for everyone. *gasp* this might be the end!!!!
I hope not, this is like the only “social media” I use outside of using youtube posts to share my fan art sometimes.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 6 months ago
@ellette-giselle thank you!!! I’m really proud of it. I’m planning to keep digitally redrawing the sketches I did for that story (it’s one of my favorites thanks to all the creatures I got to design for it lol)
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Oh not to a man’s! Just not my name so that I’ll be untrackable. An alias.
true, but even if you change it to another female name they might still be after you.
Ehh, just
Any thoughts on this whole “White Knight” business?
hmm? I must’ve missed that chapter (happens sometimes), how far back is it so I can read through it?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
I don’t know if that’ll be helpful (if you mean drafting for war). You can’t exactly change your author name to a man’s….and even if you did, they’d probably try to draft “him” lol.
Oh not to a man’s! Just not my name so that I’ll be untrackable. An alias.
lso, your recent chapters were great! It’s good to see that more and more of…
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 6 months ago
@the_lost-journal exactly.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Also, your recent chapters were great! It’s good to see that more and more of the empire is turning to God, but I can’t help but wonder if you’re setting them up with nice things only to have it all come crashing down later…….Knowing you XD
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
the women’s draft (in which case I will go under ground and change my author’s name)
I don’t know if that’ll be helpful (if you mean drafting for war). You can’t exactly change your author name to a man’s….and even if you did, they’d probably try to draft “him” lol.
Pleading medical or religious exemption (if the country has…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic PLEASE TEAR THIS APART–URGENT CRITIQUES NEEDED in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
On the topic of the sixth story: My cousin went through a self-harm attempt once. I don’t know about the details, but she is still alive so that’s gotta count for something. That story is kinda personal to me now that I see something that could drive someone over the edge.
When I have bad days, days where it seems so dark and hopeless, I…
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Keilah H. replied to the topic PLEASE TEAR THIS APART–URGENT CRITIQUES NEEDED in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 Arcane and Alder are good name switches! I like them. Also, are you going to keep the Payne and Pythonos references? I think you should; when you publish your book people will be like “oh, this is an expansion on that universe.”
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
also I read your next few chapters!! They’re great!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
@hybridlore thanks!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
It’s true! The way you write… I can see it all clearly in my mind! It really IS like a movie!
Gotta agree with Ellette on this. You write very clearly.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Yeah, I did get a feeling he didn’t love what he was doing when he was talking with Cole.
Hey, that is the best way to write. Keep at it!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
It’s true! The way you write… I can see it all clearly in my mind! It really IS like a movie!
So… was it obvious before this chapter what Alec did for his job?
I knew he did something with technology and people, and I knew he worked with the government. This didn’t come as a surprise to me at all. It was good.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
GIRL!
How do you do it?!?!
I am so hooked! OH MY WORD! I want this made into a MOVIE!!
Wow! This is so cool. I’m worried about Everett! I hope he makes it out of this one okay. What I wouldn’t give to be in his head as he reads through all those questions!!
AND ALEC!!! Oh my word! This is great!!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic PLEASE TEAR THIS APART–URGENT CRITIQUES NEEDED in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Thank you so much!!!!
I fixed the spelling!! Thanks for catching that XD
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic PLEASE TEAR THIS APART–URGENT CRITIQUES NEEDED in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
@koshka @ellette-giselle @hybridlore @theducktator @keilah-h @theshadow @anyone-else
Thank you everyone for your comments on the doc!!
The reason I haven’t added anything new is because I moved it all to Reedsy. Reedsy will professionally typeset it all, and have a more professional look to it, and I like Reedsy better for writing.
The point of…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
*Scream of pleasure!!!*
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