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Enid replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
I am very much behind, but reading the rest of it all at once will give me an idea of your pacing, too. Will get to it soon and will give feedback!
The question you accused of being AI generated may be the only one on there that is not.
Bruuuhhh
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
@ellette-giselle ahhh ok
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Enid replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
I immediately thought of Marlo and Oakley. :]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
@ellette-giselle Not sure why you’re so horrified, they’re literally the exact same questions you asked……..
I can confirm, Linus is not an AI, cause if he were, it’d be hard for him to come up with several fantasy races AND keep it consistent throughout. I’ve messed around with generative AI before (although I never use it to write for…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Dude. Ai has been asking me these questions!
*stares in horror*
😂
Of course let me know. I’d love to help with the third book! Just let me know. Maybe while you’re on your online break you can draw a bunch of illustrations! *hint hint* 🙃
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Thank you! I know, I was thinking the same thing when I looked it over again. 😂
Glad it feels realistic. I kept breaking his character here in the other drafts, so I’m really working on taking it more slowly. (Even if it makes me want to shake some sense into him!)
First, how would they get Jonathan back into the…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
~FEEDBACK~
The Narrow Path Trilogy Book 2
Character:
~ Which character(s) did you find the most compelling/relatable/believable and why?Martha. I just really liked her and could relate as an older sister. Some of her struggles felt similar to my own.
Eric was really interesting and fun. I also really liked James.
Alan…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
You gotta set it up like one of those quizzes someday. You know, the one people always use for scheduling group events that I can never figure out how to make.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
I always name them after book or movie characters. (mostly books)
For instance, this time around we have Mathias and Cornflower (Redwall)
Puss-in-boots and Kitty Softpaws (Puss In Boots)
Matimeo and Iris (Matimeo A Tale Of Redwall)
And Joe Shanks (Green Ember)
Try books and see who works. I did Jane Austen once, Lord of the Rings,…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic Anyone interested in organizing a "writing group" over the summer? in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
I’m kind of behind (and a little stuck at the moment :/) but I’ll hopefully have my fist chunk soon.
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HighScribe replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
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HighScribe replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
ALAN BECKER DOODLES YES I AM NOT ALONE
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago

Thunder has a new tail! I didn’t make the model, but I colored the tail.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
@rae Do you have any pictures of them?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
@linus-smallprint I see you’re an Alan Becker fan!! My brother loves watching those. They’re so cool.
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Hold the phone! @theducktator Just found the old update where we were last coming up with kitten names, and you suggested Sir Fluffyface! I think that’s awesome! I think I might just name my favorite that cuz I think it fits so well!
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
@loopylin @whalekeeper @keilah-h @ellette-giselle @theducktator @savannah_grace2009 @freed_and_redeemed @the_lost-journal @highscribeofaetherium @anyone else
So my cat Marbles had 6 kittens who are now almost two weeks old and I can’t think of names I like for any of them. I will be going back to the update where i last asked for help naming…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
@hybridlore    @koshka    @keilah-h     @elishavet-pidyon     @theducktator    @grcr  @whalekeeper
NEW CHAPTERS
30-31!!!!!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
@whalekeeper lollllll
also as for the character designer thing, it gets updated frequently so I don’t think it was even possible to make characters that detailed several years ago.
But then again, I am very meticulous about my charries, so……
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