hybridlore

UPDATE

I have five stories left to edit. It’s going much faster than I thought since apparently Past Me is better at editing than I thought she was, and besides a few little tweaks, I’m mostly just rereading the stories (which is so much fun! Though it feels almost like cheating. I promise I am actually editing places where I see problems!) I…[Read more]

@rae

Go Rae! Go Rae! Go Rae!!!!

I don’t think I can finish the challenge. We’ll see.

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NEW CHAPTERS!!!

*evil grin*

@theducktator

NOOOOO! My grammar Nazi!! *sobs*

lolololololol. Sounds good. I’ll be gone an entire week in July, coming up pretty soon, so that should give you all the time you need. (Though I hope to have this book finished by then)

Well, to my joy, I am finding, so far, a LOT less things to edit than I thought I would…

…Though, I’m pretty sure anyone else who reads my work will be wanted to strangle me for grammar mistakes I missed and poor scene execution. I’m just blind to it.

@whalekeeper

Okay!

@ellette-giselle

I’m going to be in Chicago from Wednesday till Sunday, and we aren’t bringing the laptops, so I’m going to disappear for a few days. I’ll catch up when I return.

@ellette-giselle

What is Jonathan’s arc supposed to be?

@hybridlore

Okay, nice!

Yes, lolol. He did apologize. For real this time.

How about Michael? Thoughts on what he said?

I just watched Animation vs. Minecraft, and it was super wholesome, I loved it

@whalekeeper I get that lol. I’m pretty chill when it comes to Minecraft too.

…And here I am, praising the game and not talking about Alan Becker. XD I still haven’t watched. Next chance I get, probably this week.

I think some YouTubers make Minecraft way too loud and showy. My brothers watch competitive YouTubers and I’ve never caught on to that. The game by itself is much more impactful.

Minecraft is the kind of thing I never thought I’d enjoy. But one day it clicked. I think the combination of the music and graphics have the same uncanny feel as old memories. Pieces of the world make sense, but much of it is random and silent. It’s such a strange, melancholic feeling.

@hybridlore

Yes, but not anyone that we know. yet

Jonathan’s arc is starting to turn around, yay! 😁 I liked the way you did that,

So what are you meaning by this? (not that your’re wrong, just interested to see how these sections are coming across to the reader.)

@highscribeofaetherium yeah, but again, those who aren’t familiar with Minecraft might not get it.

@keilah-h

I mean The Nether through Cave Spider Rollercoaster kind of had a story, but it was more like crazy event after another as they tried to get back to the PC.

@highscribeofaetherium oh yeah I forgot about that. The third season is really the only one with a story.

@ellette-giselle really?

Guess sandbox games aren’t your thing then. (Sandbox=doesn’t really have a set story, you do whatever you want. Minecraft is that way cause you can choose to turn on hostile enemies and fight them every night, or you can just mine around. Or just turn on “creative mode” and have access to everything without having to…[Read more]