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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
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well, it’s 2025, but I have one section left to post, so I think I kinda did it….. in a kinda didn’t way. lolololol.
Keep an eye out as I shall be posting THE END of TVON today!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
2025!!!!!
HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!!!

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Enid replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Happy New Year! It’s 2025!!
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 8 months ago
YOU DREW CALVIN! I LOVE IT!
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
I’m not sure what time zone you all are but HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!!!!!!
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-GRCR- replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Happy Almost New Year everyone!
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Happy Almost New Year! I’m staying up till midnight,Â
which I normally do anyway,and playing a game with my brother. My family just watched A Christmas Story for the first time, so that was fun! Are you making any New Year’s resolutions this year? I’m working on my list. -
FIREQUACKER posted an update 1 year, 8 months ago
If you see this, what is your favorite Christmas carol? Mine are Let All Mortal Flesh Keep Silence and Ding Dong Merrily on High.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
@ellette-giselle super cool!
I think my dad might have a copy of Fox’s Martyrs, but I’m not sure.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Yes, it’s supposed to be fictionalized early church. I read Foxes Book of Martyrs, The Martyrs Mirror, and Acts before I wrote these, so I draw a lot out of those. In fact, a lot of the situations are real from real people’s accounts.
Some I wrote, some are old, old hymns from the underground church.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 8 months ago
Thank you so much for the feedback! I loved this! It’s super helpful.
Side note: interestingly enough, you said that the second book is your least favorite, while I’ve preferred it so far to the first one. We’ll see how the third and fourth compare.
You know what, Aaron will always be my favorite character, but I’m growing to lik…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
So yeah, I will be sad, but I mostly get it.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
@ellette-giselle which works for a story like yours which is, from what I can tell, supposed to be kinda like a fictionalized missionary/church history story.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
same! It hurts! But I like to keep the story real.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
I’ve killed my fair share of teenagers….. and a few little kids……………..
Yeah, I have too, or at least not stopped such a thing in a fanfic if I’m rewriting it. but usually not a main character, and not super commonly on screen.
I mean if it’s realism, it kinda has to be done (oooof I sound so sadistic for saying that, I promi…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Executing a teenager and a pregnant woman is something even I would shy away from writing lol
hmmmmm.
I’ve killed my fare share of teenagers….. and a few little kids……………..
but yeah I like the hymn at the back idea! maybe if you have any recipes, or games, or other things that you put an emphasis on through the story,…
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Kate DiCamillo in the forum Book Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
I was just about to make this topic! I love Kate DiCamillo so much! I just reread The Tale of Despereaux. It’s sooo good! And Mercy Watson! I love Mercy Watson!!!!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
but yeah I like the hymn at the back idea! maybe if you have any recipes, or games, or other things that you put an emphasis on through the story, you could add those too. If not to the main series you could have a guidebook where you put those special things + any maps you’ve made.
I honestly love those kinds of guidebooks.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
and I’m the one that briefly considered violently blinding my character who kinda needs his sight for everything.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
@ellette-giselle sorry ’bout that! Mostly I just read and enjoy the chapters. Others usually say what I have in mind.
you should be. I’m above nothing.
Executing a teenager and a pregnant woman is something even I would shy away from writing lol
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I love Let All Mortal Flesh Keep Silence, that one’s probably my favorite.