hybridlore

@loopylin

Brea took several steps closer. She put a finger to her lips and shushed it. The typewriter sat still. Then, slowly, it typed out a s.

Then a h.

Then another h.

I love this.

@loopylin

173 words

Her wide, innocent eyes were of a bluish purple, flecked with white as if some painter had dabbed their brush in white and flicked it with their finger. Then, some magical fairy had come and made all the spots glow like the stars in the sky. Her skin and hair were of similar shades of the bluish purple. Even her little boots…

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@hybridlore

Okay, I wrote 500 hundred words. I won’t post them here though because they’re part of a story I plan to post soon of The Baron Chronicles topic and I really don’t want to spoil what happens in this story.

@theducktator

Liko 

Liko gratefully took the two cookies, feeling very spoiled. He had already been offered sweets by two different students, and he hadn’t even eaten breakfast yet. He thanked her again and then answered her question.

“I think it’s nice here. I like my coworkers. Bit unpredictable though. Lots of different people from lots of…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal

(where this super cool person is wearing a mask and then they remove their mask and its a GIRL 😮 nothing against girls being cool, just the trope is over used and I am more surprised when it turns out to be a male rather than a female.)

My least favorite part about this trope is the girl almost always has eyeliner on. Or they’re…[Read more]

Oh and I guess I need to throw some too.

@rae @hybridlore @freed_and_redeemed @hypridlore @theducktator @elishavet-pidyon

Throwing 3 snowballs at each of you

Here’s what I wrote if anyone wants to see:

In the late morning of one wet April day, the rain had cleared enough that Brea Thorne, age six, could go for a walk with her nanny. And she was beyond ready for it. She jumped and skipped along, looping back every once in a while to her slower paced guardian.

It was about fifteen minutes into t…[Read more]

@hybridlore Thanks XD  I needed the motivation. I got a part of a scene that’s been stuck in my head out finally.

If I had any other older snowballs, I’m just going to forget about them lol

@theducktator

*gasp* It’s a date!

Yes!! 🤭 In my first draft I actually never wrote a scene of their first study sesh together…do you think I should add that in for the second draft??

When what, Tyler? 👀 I want to know…

I would like to know as well… 🤣

Definitely left that open for the imagination or a future short story &#x1f44…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Ok, so I told you I’d finish reading your book by the end of February, and I did! But I only started like two days ago. 🤣 Here are my thoughts! (Excuse any typos, I was doing this in the car, lol!)

Ok, so the biggest thing I noticed was the lack of hope throughout the story. The characters seemed to think about death a lot…[Read more]

@rae

Probably Baron himself. I love Rya though; she’s adorable.

@theducktator

Thx!

Who was your favorite?

@rae

I just read through all of this and enjoyed it immensely. 😃 I love your characters so much!

@ellette-giselle

and then he just magically wins.

Hehe, I no longer get angry, just amused.

@ellette-giselle

Oooh, I love Puss in Boots, especially the Last Wish. That movie was as good as the second Spiderverse, imo.

@the_lost-journal

(where this super cool person is wearing a mask and then they remove their mask and its a GIRL 😮

I think of Samurai X and Faith from Ninjago. They did it twice, several seasons apart.

@freed_and_redeemed

I have this forum open on my laptop. I’m gonna tag you to see if you’re able to find it again. If not, oh well. Just thought I’d give it a try! 😉

@the_lost-journal

You can also do that but do “is this a female” because that seems to be popular theme XD

(where this super cool person is wearing a mask and then they remove their mask and its a GIRL 😮

Immediately comes to mind…….

@whalekeeper

Oh, did you have a subplot POV on the side following the rescue?

No, two of my side characters were spies and they kept reporting the enemy and allies movements back to the MC. Plus, at one point when the MC was captured two of the officers get a message and kind of act startled. They leave the room, but the reader hardly notices…[Read more]