hybridlore

@linus-smallprint

Is it bad that it was reversed?

I’m not convinced by Julian telling Dian the gospel in that moment

Ugh.

I had that feeling as I was editing it.

Hmm…. I might possibly chuck that section altogether………..

So is it bad that Julian responded differently?

Well….. I think that might be because that tends to be w…[Read more]

@esther-c

I’m loving this story! It has a warm and cozy feel but also real challenges high schoolers face.

Easton brought his sand bike to a halt a few feet from the campfire the rest were beginning to set up. He removed his helmet, shaking out his hair.

OK I was majorly confused here at first- I didn’t know who “the rest” was referring to until…[Read more]

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Leon woke in the darkness. He heard Rolf breathing and felt the rocking of the ship below him. He sat up, wondering where they were going and what fate lay ahead. Leon leaned against the side of the ship’s hold and drew his knees to his chest,…

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@liberty

I think so! Send it!

@ellette-giselle

Yes! That song really goes up and down. Have you learned “Not Alone”? (the most epic Christian girl song ever…)

@stephie

*Laughs* Sounds like you know how to steel the show.

@liberty

Yeah I know. At first I could never see it fitting, but the more I listened to it the more I kept thinking about these guys, (specifically Leon for some reason) so now it has to be the book theme song, because I think about them every time. 😂

Ah, I get it.

We didn’t do Aladdin because of the clothing the girls are wearing. I have…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Oh! Okay.

@ellette-giselle

By the way, my family loves the new Aladdin film! It’s way better than the cartoon one. And yes. I LOVE that Speechless song! Even my brother does!

I love the story of the Genie and…well…I won’t give it away. There’s just one weird part in one of the songs…but other than that…we LOVE it!!!

The same composer who wro…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Oh sorry, I was thinking about one of my characters.

@ellette-giselle

🤣 That’s your theme song?! Okay, I can see the words fit well…but the style is so different! Imagine seeing pictures of your guys slide-showing through that song! I just find it funny, because the book’s feel and the song’s feel are so different.

It feels like having “Trouble” play at the end of Chosen season 1!!

@liberty

Who?

I’ve killed a lot……

Also, what do you think of the song?

@ellette-giselle

🤣😭 That is SO TRUE!!!!!!!!!!!!! *sobbing about one death in particular….*

@ellette-giselle

Huh. Your brain went to securing the definition of henchman, while I almost immediately looked for what else to do with them. Interesting.

*Logs into psychic database*

@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint       @liberty

Look y’all, whatever you may think…. this is actually the truth.

@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint      @liberty

How about this one?