hybridlore

YAY. IT WORKED. I THOUGHT- why am I typing in all caps…

It wasn’t working and I thought this would be the day I died (not really)! But it’s working now!

@hybridlore @ellette-giselle honestly I didn’t see her as a love interest for him. It just didn’t make sense to me. So yeah, having a bunch of scenes of them interacting and then saying “they’re not meant to be a thing” would be weird.

*testing to see if it won’t crash on me when I try to post this time, unlike the other 10000 times I tried*

@the_lost-journal

Psst, Phillip. Get rid of Piper next, will you?

@hybridlore

No problem. I guessed I’d get your attention with the second scene rather then the first. 😂

Well, I mentioned that Julian didn’t ever go down there, so his reputation got around through gossip rather then his own words.

She will become a part of the church, but she and Julian will not really have any scenes together. 1, it’s not…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

I could see people getting confused and overwhelmed since there’s so many of them hahaha

This reminded me of a time a visitor to our church told my dad that the number of kids he had intimidated her. She was completely serious and never came back. There were only four of us at the time too. XD

Yayy success

@raxforge

Mateo would be right on the line of arson and murder, lol

I can add him in. XD it’s somewhat concerning how full those two categories are.

@whalekeeper

You hit the nail on the head. In-story, little Hugo steals rare spices because he wants to learn to make fancy pastries and tea leaves.

Hehe I knew it.

I could also see…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Yep that’s true.

YES!! Thank you! It is!

@hybridlore

If you can pause a moment in your sorrow over Leon, what did you think of the scene with Julian and Rosalind?

not my video btw

have a day gecko y’all

@hybridlore lol

@ellette-giselle well it’s cause Leon’s being whipped and will probably die.

But I mean like we should be used to that by now. Julian helping Rosalind is novel and thus should get attention.

@hybridlore

Yeah. A friend told me to split it or else he’ll wait to read it when he’s in solitary confinement. 😂

@keilah-h

Yeah! I’m glad you mentioned Julian. Most of the focus seems to be on Leon. I wonder why………… 🤔🤣

Do you think I’m really gonna tell you that?

@ellette-giselle wow! What a section. Between Julian’s encounter and Leon’s torture, this was a lot.

Is Leon gonna die or will his life be spared? (even if only for a little while longer)

one thing I’ll suggest, is that I feel like you don’t really introduce the family to us in the first few chapters. At first I wasn’t even sure if Blake was their sibling or not XDXD

They do have a HUGE family, so setting a solid foundation and making all the siblings and the parents unique and established in our minds would be a big thing you…[Read more]

@esther-c

Sorry it took me so long to get to this!!!
I like it a lot!!!! <3 keep it up!!!!

@stephie that first one lol

literally me

I have dozens of stories but only like three are properly finished….

@hybridlore

I don’t know. You see, because I split Leon and Julian’s story, this book got to 1200+ book pages, so I’m going to cut it in half, but it’s still one full book on the Word Document. I think we only have about 100 Word Doc pages left before the place I planned to split the book, but I could be mistaken.

@loopylin

I love those! 🤣

@hybridlore

Hmm, I’m not sure.

I think we have close to 100 pages left.